Love me not

Nov 21, 2008 21:21


This is my first fanfic - so please tell me if you like it or if it's terrible!! I'd really appriciate it and would love comments!

Also, i use a bit of british slang, so if you don't get it, just ask me! (i tried not to use to much! lol)
Also, i am sorry for the not so good yunjae scene. If this chapter gets positive reviews, i'll write better ones!

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love me not, jaeho

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tashyahero November 21 2008, 21:41:15 UTC
Sp0t for me and dbsk_jaeho...x33

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tashyahero November 21 2008, 21:47:33 UTC
Yunho..you meannie head!!..p0or jae :-x..n0w..haha..the new kim jaejo0ng..h0w will jae react to yunho ne? Huhuhuhuhu~ i love this..do c0ntinue and update s0on..

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kittlewit November 21 2008, 21:51:27 UTC
thankyou!!! i was really nervous about it!
lol
i'll try to make the next one longer though....

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crazzyme8 November 21 2008, 21:49:13 UTC
i hope you continue it. this is good. i wonder what's going to happen in the next chapter. will jae give yunho a difficult time or will he make it easy for yunho? keep it up.

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kittlewit November 21 2008, 21:51:42 UTC
Thankyou!

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reveriepooh November 23 2008, 02:47:13 UTC
Hey....I just "found" your fic, and back track it.
I like it.....will continue reading.

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kittlewit November 23 2008, 08:50:45 UTC
thankyou

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tickled41 November 23 2008, 08:25:54 UTC
Hohoho this a quite interesting~ 8DD

HAHA the only image that comes to mind of a fat jaejoong is a baby jaejoong<3
awww yunnie's so shallow in this story DD:

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