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Will you be mine? - chapter 5

Jan 29, 2009 23:03

Title: Will you be mine?
Author: Kittlewit
Rating: PG-13 (NC-17 later on)
Genre: Romance/Drama/Slight Angst and Humor
Pairing(s): YunJae; YooSu; one sided JaeChun
Length: 5/?
Basic Synopsis: Yunho is the Prince of Korea and life is good. Until his parent tell him of his impending marriage to a girl he hates! then he meets Jaejonng...but does Jaejoong ( Read more... )

yunjae, will you be mine?

Comments 19

nericia January 30 2009, 06:19:12 UTC

ahh they were so sweet! Yunho already calling Jaejoongie "baby" :) We have to get rid of this Ahyoomee girl as soon as it's possible :) Yunho really have a huge problem. How can a crown prince tell his parents that he loves another boy?? I really wonder what's gonna happen next ;)

kiyazawa January 30 2009, 07:12:35 UTC

wwaaahhhhh!!! >.<
they're kisssed!!! Ommooo... O.o
and almost.. almost.... do 'something' there...
hohoho.... xDD
i thought jae mad to yunho...
i'm surprised when he suddenly kissed yunho first... *gigles...*
aaahh...
that bitch!!!
he should leave yunho soon!!

facesandmasks January 30 2009, 09:25:06 UTC

Oh yes, NC-17 is too early. Try to drag the story on even further, especially the part where lust is denied.

Please elaborate in greater detail the part where Yunho's afraid of his parents and hope to see that in the future. I'll wait.

kittlewit January 30 2009, 17:00:15 UTC

hmm, yeah, I'm gonna go into more detail in teh nexr few chapters, I was reading this after I posted and realized it's moving quite fast, lol!

tickled41 January 30 2009, 10:18:12 UTC

Hmm how are yunhos parents gonna take it?
Why's jaejoong crying? DD:

Hmmm.. Not to be rude or anything, but the story seems to be moving a bit too fast
but then again its just my opinion (please don't hate me >______<)

kittlewit January 30 2009, 17:01:35 UTC

No, I appreciate constructive criticism! I was re-reading after I posted and I think it's moving too fast as well - I going to go into more detail in the future

tickled41 January 31 2009, 08:05:10 UTC

ahh im sorry-- >_________<
i feel like a total jerk now DD:

please do know that i love your fic<3 >________<

kittlewit January 31 2009, 08:39:02 UTC

Oh no, please don't!!!!
I really do appreciate people telling me what they think :D

glad you love this hehe <3

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lluvia_princesa January 31 2009, 16:48:54 UTC

gyaaaaaa!! luv this! (: updateee sooon plssssss!