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I'll love you whatever - oneshot

Mar 10, 2009 01:52

Title: I'll love you whatever
Length: Oneshot
Author:Kittlewit
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Yunjae
Warning: INCEST - if you are uncomfortable, please don't read
Summary: Jaejoong is a confused 19 year old accused of murdering his best friends mum, who also happens to be his lover
A/N: I don't really know what inspired me... read at your own risk

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i'll love you whatever, yunjae

Comments 48

alex202 March 10 2009, 05:23:29 UTC

haha I loved it !!!! There is a huge twist in the end ! I was so so surprised when I reached the end and found out the truth !

“As I was saying,the love of your life is sleeping with someone else, coming home smelling of a woman. You smell the perfume when you undress him, when you kiss him, when you lick his pe-”

<3

kittlewit March 10 2009, 08:35:01 UTC

Thank you! I was going to put more in, but I was too tired

aitsukame March 10 2009, 06:44:44 UTC

omg! honestly, i tried to stop mid way and not continue but anyways, i did XD it's great! i like the ending! haha!

kittlewit March 10 2009, 08:35:56 UTC

haha, yeah, lots of people don't like father/son...me included! thanks!

anthem4cruelty March 10 2009, 07:35:18 UTC

hummm... deliciously twisted ;D

so wrong yet so right, will there be another?

kittlewit March 10 2009, 08:37:02 UTC

thank you, deliciously twisted yunjae is nice... I might write a conclusion

jennikim319 March 10 2009, 08:16:46 UTC

Love incest, especially when it's YunJae father-son!!! Kekeke (I'm sick like that, but hey, when it's in the world of fiction it's all fine to me XD). I wonder, did Yunho kill Junsu's mom? And wow, I love how they had a quickie right after the trial XD This story was super interesting ~

kittlewit March 10 2009, 08:38:35 UTC

Lol, I've written brother-brother incest before, but never father/son, so I though I'd give it a go! (Don't worry, I'm a bit sick too) yes, Yunho killed Junsu's mum :(
thanks for reading!

boxxme March 10 2009, 09:32:07 UTC

does jae know that yunho was the one who killed junsu's mom?! o.O that's kinda freaky to have such an obsessive father.. but if it's yunho i wouldn't mind LOLX

boxxme March 10 2009, 09:33:48 UTC

oh i just remember you wrote that yunho said he's have confessed right away so that means that jae knows right?? wow wOw this is.. different HAHAX love yunjae anyways~

kittlewit March 10 2009, 13:20:57 UTC

thanks! yeah, anyone but Yunho would be weird, but somehow he...lol