unconditional love - within reason

Sep 09, 2004 13:39

A short story i wrote tonight. All thoughts/comments/feedback, positive or negative, is welcome.

Annabel )

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cadaverique September 9 2004, 07:30:16 UTC
I really liked it. I wish that my stories scanned as well.

It's an excellent piece, I can't believe it was written only tonight.

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violentcrumble September 9 2004, 08:23:40 UTC
You write so well. I really enjoyed that Emma :)

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wasteboy September 9 2004, 16:32:13 UTC
oh my freaking hell that was really, really, amazing.

honestly.

emma, that was brilliant. really. (you should know me well enough to know i mean it.)

awesome.

thanks :-D

*hugs*

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elektracomplex September 10 2004, 03:25:55 UTC
I like the idea of how annabel was percieved to be so sweet and innocent, yet underneath the act, she was actually what society deems to be "evil". This reminds me so much of the series "Twin Peaks". I'm not sure if youve seen it before, but a girl by the name of Laura dies, she was percieved by most of the town to be a kind hearted, sweet girl, that would never do anything wrong. However as the story goes on, you find out that Laura's real life was totally different. She was working as a prostitute and very sexual, she was cheating on her boyfriend with numberous people including her psychiatrist, she had many evil and strange thoughts inside her head, and she dreamed of the day that she was going to die. I like that kind of thing, that everything is not what it seems.

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crypt0rchid September 10 2004, 23:30:05 UTC
I like it. Very much.

Incidentally, yesterday at work, I was thinking about all the shameful things about me that would surface when I die and how much of an embarrassment I would be to my family and friends.

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