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[cerchilaverita]

“Wow, Kit Kat, thanks for getting these all nice and buttery,” Pyro drawled, swiping Kitty’s plate from the counter as she reached into the cabinet above for a glass.

“Hey!” She nearly dropped the glass, whirling around to snatch at the plate. John neatly stepped aside, and Kitty, propelled by her momentum, made a full 180 before slamming

Comments

[arliddian]

Oh my gosh! SO CUTE! One thing - should the "That you" in the third-last paragraph be "Then you"?

Aww, I've missed kyro! Well done with this, very sweet and now I want some pancakes!

[cerchilaverita]

Hee, thanks :)

Yeah, I was worried that that third-last paragraph would be confusing because of all the trailing off and stuff, but the full sentence goes like, "Well, good. That means that you won't mind me taking yours!" Just, it got split up a lot...

[arliddian]

Ah, yes, I got confused because I missed the "That means" at first. My bad!

[curly_the_sue]

This is soooooooo cute! Thanks for sharing!

[hazy_crazy]

Ooh, I remember you ;) I loved your Kyro fics! And I adored this :P Haha I can so imagine both of them fighting over the pancakes. I liked that John's hand was trembling :P Hehehe. Well done! I miss Kyro.

[enelya_telemnar]

So cute! I really liked this. I love how he stole the pancakes at the very end -- just when you think he's gonna soften up, lol. I love that his hand was shaking at the end, great detail! Very nice job.