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kittybats

because I'll be watching TDK soon!!!

Jul 17, 2008 19:03

Title: Giving In
Pairing: Batman/Catwoman (more like Bruce Wayne/Selina Kyle)
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Batman and Catwoman belong to DC Comics and each other. Inspired by The Thomas Crown Affair, with a line taken from the movie. I don’t know who owns the rights, but it’s not me.
Notes: Since I will be watching The Dark Knight in a few hours, I thought ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

rocaw July 19 2008, 17:17:57 UTC

Ooooh, interesting! I like his reluctance and the fact she only wants him! Nice! =)

kittybats July 20 2008, 18:57:05 UTC

I like how this turned out, so thank you! ^^

rocaw August 22 2008, 18:57:21 UTC

Would it be all right if I archived this at the cat and the bat? If not, it's okay! =)

kittybats August 22 2008, 19:30:04 UTC

Sure! That'd be sweet! ^^

miravisu August 13 2008, 21:00:56 UTC

Nicely done. I like the chemistry and the dance they do, that does continue beyond the dancefloor.. even up to rooftops.. ;)

kittybats August 19 2008, 00:29:14 UTC

Thank you!! ^_^

Chem goddessa39 August 21 2008, 00:36:39 UTC

The Chemistry is nice-the way though he is hesitant he can be pushed to it do to the sparkage.

Re: Chem kittybats August 26 2008, 01:44:02 UTC

Thank you! ^_^

cleome45 October 24 2008, 20:17:11 UTC

...He wasn’t nearly as subconscious about his body with no light to reveal all his secrets...

"Subconscious about" doesn't really work here. Something like "mindful of," "protective of," etc. might be better. Some synonym for protective or another...

I'm only being nitpicky about it because there's not a wrong note to be found in the rest of the story. Very nice work. :)

(I wandered over from comicstore_news, btw.)

kittybats October 24 2008, 22:38:10 UTC

Thank you for the con crit! You know, it bothered me a bit, too. Bruce is supposed to have a body in peak perfection, why would he be subconscious about it? Sure the scars, but I couldn't come up with a better way to phrase his being uncomfortable and since I wrote it a few hours before I saw TDK, I posted it pretty much once I finished it! LOL! I really like "mindful of" though. Hope it's okay to use. ^^'

(Yay! Pimping works! ^_~)

cleome45 October 26 2008, 20:22:49 UTC

Of course it's okay. :)

I'd be dead in the water myself without the wonder that is the online thesaurus.

;)

kittybats October 28 2008, 18:10:00 UTC

Thank you! ^_^