Cumulative Degeneration

[kittymaru]

This format kicks my butt. I thought it was vignette time again, but now I'm a bit unsure.

Comments

[kittymaru]

She's a funny one. I swear she worships the ground he walks on and there's really no good reason for it. XD

[once_cherished]

Oh dear. XD

[kittymaru]

oh noes! *key dramatic music*

[jevawtmok]

Awww, the eternal question, so hard to answer!

[kittymaru]

haha! Which part? They've got so many problems strung up in that mess. ^_~

[thesaraghina]

I couldn't help but laugh a little at poor Martel, the way he kinda stopped and thought about it, when she laid out all his faults for him. ^^;;

But this was done really well! Very interested in seeing more, oh yes. Also, I really liked how Rogue was mirroring Martel at the end there. Great posing!

♥

[kittymaru]

But I don't think he's thinking about the right things.

But I know I need to sit and think about what happens next.

Thanks! ♥

[zagzagael]

FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I honestly do not know how you keep on doing this - this is brilliant!!! I love it, I'm going to go read it again right now.

One small concrit - can you give each speaker there own font/bubble/etc.?

[kittymaru]

Oh, I know. I also forgot a question mark and started bolding text, what - 3 frames in? And I was lazy because it's really just for fun, but I *should* just spend the extra half-hour and make it consistent and obvious that text ourside of bubbles isn't spoken, and text inside is, but then there are bubbles vs. blocks. Yep. I got me some problems.

Should I give each one a separate font? Or I could, say, italicize Alyce. And should I use bubbles or blocks? I do need to differentiate and honestly, this one's a mess. Kind of like my brain-box.

I'm glad it somehow still manages to work.