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kiwi_socks

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Oct 01, 2006 00:41

I...Had the sudden urge to write a Naruto!Harem fic. No beta and I barely went over it, so expect some mistakes (I would appreciate anything people would like to point out :D)

( And here it is )

narusasusaku; harem!

Comments 14

sparklemagpie October 1 2006, 04:47:22 UTC

Sai was the last one; he had showed up one day on the doorstep, shoved himself in, made rude comments about everyone's sex lives, and refused to leave.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA! *DEAD* XD That is soooo Sai! XD

kiwi_socks October 1 2006, 04:49:58 UTC

I love Sai, in only the way you can hate someone. XD

Thanks so much~

bubble October 1 2006, 05:06:22 UTC

*cracks up* I LOVED IT!! XDD <333 How I love harem fics. ♥ Great job.

kiwi_socks October 1 2006, 18:09:51 UTC

Glad I made someone laugh! And they are the best, aren't they? :D

hashire October 1 2006, 06:12:52 UTC

I enjoy how that all just came together the way it did. People just started coming around and just didn't leave. I liked how Ino did things, but Sai was definitely the best.

kiwi_socks October 1 2006, 18:11:14 UTC

Thanks so much! <3 I'm beginning to feel rather pround about Sai's part XD

hashire October 1 2006, 20:34:56 UTC

It is definitely Sai.

____ero__sennin October 1 2006, 06:32:51 UTC

This...is just made of win. Especially the Sai bit, as has been noted several times. Naruto harems ftw, yo.

kiwi_socks October 1 2006, 18:12:53 UTC

Does it get a blue ribbon for first place? [/obscure song reference]

Thanks you so much!

askerian October 1 2006, 10:27:46 UTC

The end bit about the vailleys and landscapes thing really makes this all come together. ^__^ ♥

kiwi_socks October 1 2006, 18:15:50 UTC

I love your icon <3

And thanks; when I first wrote it, it seemed pretty random to stick symbology in there. I'm so glad you think it worked well.