Comments | kiwileesa: New part to fic

kiwileesa

New part to fic

Mar 22, 2004 13:57

Okay i have put a new part up Part eight A ( Read more... )

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chip_dip March 22 2004, 00:15:08 UTC

::runs of to read::

kiwileesa April 7 2004, 17:52:38 UTC

I hope you like it

8a anonymous March 28 2004, 10:39:58 UTC

This part was fine. I would have like to have heard the conversation continued from 7 but at least you cleared up the mating thing.

I like how you have Willow being a little subversive thing - no blood for Xander - does she want the babies to die, all her concern a sham?

I love this fic and am awaiting 8b.

Linda C.

Re: 8a kiwileesa April 7 2004, 18:02:16 UTC

thanks for reading, i may do a 'flash back' so the readers can see why and how xander got around to the idea of mating with spike, still trying to work out how to fit all that in, Willow will come around (i hope) she has just spent a lot of time with buffy who has been going on and on about the fact the babies could be evil etc etc. Hope you will feel better with things when part b is done.

xx_nuriko_xx April 5 2004, 10:57:14 UTC

I adore this story! Why aren't you happy with the new part? Please don't be too hart to yourself! Maybe it helps when I'm saying, that it had made me really happy?!^^

Greetings from Germany
Nuriko

kiwileesa April 7 2004, 18:12:06 UTC

thank you so much for reading, im happy to hear that you liked it, i hope i will feel better with it when part b is done

anonymous April 7 2004, 11:25:45 UTC

hurray!!!! more now please. not enough. need more!!! pretty please with a naked spike & xander on top. :D

kiwileesa April 7 2004, 18:21:42 UTC

naked spike and xander on top? im really going to have to work hard now :) I hope part b will be done in a couple of weeks, im working on something else right now then i can give all i got to spells. It will NOT be as long as a wait as last time. Thanks so much for reading.

Spells anonymous April 24 2004, 20:07:31 UTC

Why is Xander waiting until after the babes are born for the mating? I really like the fic, but I don't get that part. Drinking from Spike would make the babies stronger, wouldn't it?

Re: Spells kiwileesa May 22 2004, 00:52:27 UTC

Why is Xander waiting? because he is trying to deal with too much at once, he's have babies, he's a man that's not meant to happen, he's sleeping with spike,....SPIKE that's not meant to happen in Xander's world. On top of all that he's gay now. That is to much for Xander to take in at once , so he's put the more or less being married to SPIKE on hold till at least the babies get here. It's Xanders way of handing things. Thanks for reading and I hope you will like the new part which will be out soon.