"My Beautiful One" [8]

[kiyei]

Title: My Beautiful One (CH.8)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Onho, others by chapter
Notes: Okay so I totally lied about getting over that wall. =| I didn’t expect this story to explode like it did last chapter, lmao. Thank you so much for the comments and support everyone, and I’m so glad you’re all enjoying it. This chapter is a bit more light-hearted to

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[kiyei]

Yeobo always gets a spot ♥

[vipjuly]

still pissed you wrote this----------- oh i was watching scott pilgrim when you posted, that's why.
anyway blah blah rage troll minho with sparkles because taemin's a little demon child and baw
just make it a threesome already

[kiyei]

THAT'S what you were doing. I knew there was a reason I didn't harass you about it. I guess 'sleep' was just what I filled the blank in with xD

Trolling everyone with glitter because Jonghyun wasn't in this chapter.

I CAN'T WRITE THREESOMES OTL

[acrosstherug]

SCREAMS THE FIC THAT I WAS ONE MONTH LATE FOR BUT STILL UPDATED SCREAMS.

i love it. i cant even. please dont make me quote back the whole thing to you T^T Jinki and that garlic omg i die. so much. he is made of such precious. also sobs Taemin and Jinki dynamics are beautiful okay ♥

I will await the next one with bated breath! and hwaiting!

[kiyei]

Ahaha thank you XD ♥

Lol no quote backs necessary. That chapter took me so long I could probably recite it from memory T_T Spazz!Jinki was fun. I'm glad you enjoyed him lololol

Let's see if I can get chapter 9 done in under a month rofl *throws fist in air*

[acrosstherug]

XDDD well at least you're dedicated? :D ahaha fist pump jersey shore style! /bricked but maybe the reception for this chapter will motivate you yeah? hwaaaaaaaaaaiting n_n

[a_life_defiant]

SCREAMING!!! SPOT. OMO I have been waiting for this....

[a_life_defiant]

Before him stood an irritated creeper, one hand shielding his sensitive eyes while the rest of his body sparkled in the sunbeams; quite literally twinkling as if he’d been showered in crushed diamonds. Jinki’s other eye opened, and his jaw slackened. “You’re shitting me.”

“I was helping Taemin with an art project,” he insisted, swiping the glitter off of his cheek and onto the floor, where it would surely give Jinki hell in its removal. “He got playful and threw a handful of glitter at me,”

AHAHAAHHA OMFG I said the same thing before I got to the second part XD

As it was though, his choices were limited, and as Minho’s mouth trailed further up his neck, one of those was beginning to seem better than the others. Jinki shuddered, eyes going half-lidded as Minho’s tongue traced the thick vein on his neck, lips following shortly after. “Jinki,” he spoke against the moist flesh, “do you trust me?”

AHHHHHHH!!!! you stop HERE? *pouts*

It was great bb! but it only makes me want more, LOL *greedy*

♥

[kiyei]

LOL. Omg I could never write a serious story involving sparkly vampires. The idea just makes me cringe. Glitter-covered Minho however is a-okay in my book.

and yes it's a requirement for me to end in cliffhangers kekekeke. So sorry x3

I'll try to be a bit quicker with the next one, lmao. Thank you as always ♥

[fantasydesire]

I.. WAS not a fan of Jinki and Minho together.. but you changed my mind.. me love~ I like your fics!!!! and I absolutely love vampire Minho~
XD

ps : thanks for writing and sharing..

[kiyei]

YES. ONHO IS BEAUTIFUL AND NEEDS TO BE LOVED MORE ♥ I'm glad I could enlighten you xD

Thank you for reading~ I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

[wishiwuzkagome]

Jinki’s other eye opened, and his jaw slackened. “You’re shitting me.”
YOU DON'T KNOW HOW HARD I LAUGHED. OH MY GOD I AM STILL LAUGHING.

But aaaaaaaaah I'm so interested! I don't even like vampires! djhgsdkjfg Update pleasepleaseplease!

[wishiwuzkagome]

Did I mention that I didn't like tofuho either before I started reading this? Dear god. You're like magic.

[kiyei]

You know I don't usually like vampire fics either lmao. That's why I kind of did a... twist I guess? xD The mean and ugly ones are so much more fun that the "Hallo, I ooze charisma and am perpetually beautiful" ones.

O: I love hearing when I convert someone to the TofuHo side kekeke. They're so beautifully awkward together. IT'S WONDERFUL.

Pecking at Chap 9 currently. Thanks for being patient lol x)