College~

[kiyoshiro]

They brush each other's hands when the train suddenly lurches and people scramble to keep their balance. Neither of them says anything, hoping that the other doesn’t notice how it makes the hairs on the back of their necks stand up. The man with the mole on his chin leaves first, disappearing into a sea of people as the doors close. The man with

Comments

[guppy_chan]

i love this! it's incredibly cute n sweet!
thanks for sharing =)

[kiyoshiro]

Thank YOU so much for reading! First comment! ^^

[himitsu_17]

It's cute :3
I think it's really cute ^-^

I love how it begin and all :3
I'm just sad that I end this fast!
But I love it!

[kiyoshiro]

I am soooo glad you liked it! :D

If you want a longer Ohmiya fanfiction, I'm in the middle of one! It's about three chapters in though... lol.

[zukkoke_iero]

cu-cute...

[kiyoshiro]

Thank you so much! ^^

[betzi_chan]

i totally like it.
to me it has a calm feeling, but at the same time full of love and excitement.
i can't really explain it, but i really like it! ^^

thanks for sharing!

[kiyoshiro]

Wow... thank you so much for the comment!! I kind of wrote this on a whim and didn't really check if it flowed. I'm glad I was able to convey a calm, but interesting atmosphere! :D

[mikamichael]

cute~~~ x3
ohmiya just too cute,,,ahhh~~~~
i love the atmosphere u create there,,
thanks for writing,,, ahhh,, be waiting for How we Live update ~~ XDD

[kiyoshiro]

HEY THERE! :DDDD

Thank you so much for the comment! I love those innocent, shy atmospheres and I'm glad my rambling one-shot somehow got there. XD

I'm actually pretty motivated to get back to it, so who knows? I might have a new chapter soon. :D

Again, thank you for the comment!