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Jul 08, 2005 21:57
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eye_sac
July 9 2005, 07:35:11 UTC
First, regarding your page on Elfwood, WHY DO YOU ALWAYS PUT YOUR REAL NAME EVERYWHERE?
Second, regarding your story, try using more vowels. And ya gotta explain things. Otherwise Sci-fi just doesn't work.
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Second, regarding your story, try using more vowels. And ya gotta explain things. Otherwise Sci-fi just doesn't work.
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