But Hast Thou Met the Shadow Boss...? Part II
I have not yet the right to name myself but that will change today and then I will have a name. It is enough to say that I am a servant of Thor, He What is God of the Storms that Cleanse, Commander of the Lightning and Bringer of the Thunder. I and all those with me have been given warhammers with which to hunt the dreaded Frost Giants, for today
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I'm going to agree with Kevin. I like this style more than the one in your novels. I notice you're cutting out a lot of unnecessary words (which is noticeable to a person who has an idea of your novel style) and making your sentences more concise. On a small note, this concise styling makes the "Thor, He What is God of the Storms that Cleanse, Commander of the Lightning and Bringer of the Thunder" not be obnoxious, so you're letting concepts drive the work rather than long ramblings.
My fingers are cold.
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