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frolicndetour February 12 2008, 21:15:57 UTC
As Lee followed him to a quiet corner of the commercial docking bay he found himself mentally devising contingency plans to break her out if it turned out she was a Cy... . Lee shook the thought away. Though it was still a sobering thought to realise it didn’t matter to him if she was.

I like this - I can easily imagine Lee going to either extreme - Kara's a cylon that means it was all a LIE, or, Kara's back from the dead, that means I have the second chance you never get, and that's all that matters.

Helo coughed delicately. “Conjugal visit.”

Hee! Brilliant.

I like the way you dispose of the Sam issue and the cylon issue - briefly yet plausibly. And I do like that Sam doesn't suffer too much! ;)

For some reason she felt hesitant to make the first move.

You capture her fear and hesitation here very well. *sniff* It's not going to be easy for our girl next season!

Lee breathed rapidly against the side of her face, and gripped her even tighter. It took her a moment to realise he was whispering her name over and over again. ( ... )

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latteaddict February 13 2008, 13:09:55 UTC
I like this - I can easily imagine Lee going to either extreme - Kara's a cylon that means it was all a LIE, or, Kara's back from the dead, that means I have the second chance you never get, and that's all that matters.

It's a sobering thought, isn't it? Lee doesn't wear his 'serial contrarian' t-shirt for nothing. I was mentioning to cherylad further up about Jamie saying in an interview that Lee hates Cylons, would easily throw Sharon out of an airlock and would eat a Cylon if he was hungry enough. If Lee tries to eat Kara (and not in that fun way) I might have a problem with that.

Hee! Brilliant.

I figured Helo would be dirty enough to think of that *ha*

I like the way you dispose of the Sam issue and the cylon issue - briefly yet plausibly. And I do like that Sam doesn't suffer too much! ;)

I had it in my head that Sam sticking with Tory so no broken heart for him.

You capture her fear and hesitation here very well.Thank you. I figured after the way Lee went off his nut the last time she tried to ask him to be hers, that Kara would ( ... )

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jei_e February 12 2008, 21:28:58 UTC
Latte, this was delicious. The last line is simply.... oh my what can I say? My heart went boom.

Beautiful. Seriously, devastatingly beautiful...and even more kudos for thing up such a cleaver and entertaining way to get Lee aboard Galactica hehehehe

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latteaddict February 13 2008, 13:17:45 UTC
booming heart is a fantastic compliment, thank you!

And I'm glad you enjoyed Helo's unorthodox plan to get Lee aboard *grin*

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jatnj February 13 2008, 00:49:42 UTC
Oh...That was just the sweetest - all he wants to do is hold her! I'm goo.

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latteaddict February 13 2008, 13:18:42 UTC
goo is good! Glad you liked it :) :)

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smact46 February 13 2008, 01:00:37 UTC
"Lee shook his head and spoke close to her ear, lips sliding like a path of silk fire across her skin, “Questions can wait, Kara. Right now I just need to hold you.”

Oh what I would give to see this play out in canon. It's beautiful Latte. I love it.

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latteaddict February 13 2008, 13:19:40 UTC
Thank you :) My mushy side was in full force by the end of this fic.

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latteaddict February 17 2008, 08:10:20 UTC
Thanks! Yes, colluding friends can come in handy sometimes :)

thanks for reading

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