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All's Fair In Love and War Games (NC-17)

Feb 17, 2008 12:24

Title: All's Fair In Love and War Games
Author: featherjean
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Timeline: set sometime before Pegasus; flashes back to pre-series
Word count: 2,644
Summary: The Galactica pilots are engaged in war games, leading Lee and Kara to discuss the games they played back in flight school.
Written for: elzedAuthor's notes: I actually combined both ( Read more... )

stories, 2007

Comments 7

canadiangirl_86 February 17 2008, 19:04:10 UTC

That was really well done! You've got their banter down so beautifully, and I laughed out loud several times!

Also did a wonderful job building the tension between them before the hotness began. Loved it!

ancarett February 17 2008, 19:11:16 UTC

That was great -- both for the banter and for the sexy back story you developed in here. Great set-up of the parallel moments and, oh, what a hot finish you provided!

elzed February 17 2008, 20:51:54 UTC

Oh, that was frakking perfect! You got the banter spot on, from the opening scene onwards; and I love how Starbuck cheats knowing exactly where Lee's weakness lies (oh, poor Lee), and the frak or fight moment:

His fingers tightened, digging into her flesh. He shoved her towards the wall, still holding on. He stepped into her personal space, close enough to feel her breath on his skin. “I mean it, Kara,” he growled, staring her down. “Never do that to me again.”

She was breathing hard, glaring at him. She was pissed now, and he was glad. Maybe she’d punch him. Maybe she’d give him an excuse and they’d tear each other to shreds right here in this hallway. She’d lose that smugness and he’d have bruises for a week but they’d end up laughing and she really was alive.

His brain said, “Frak this,” and he kissed her.Oh, that was intense and hot and most definitely turned up some Alpha Male Lee, thank you! And I love that you leave it with a promise of more to come, because as far as these two are concerned, it's an ongoing saga ( ... )

latteaddict February 19 2008, 11:14:18 UTC

oh, wow, I really enjoyed that. So much dangerous emotion flying back and forth. Loved it!

coldspace February 19 2008, 18:42:14 UTC

Nice!
Loved the banter and how you bring their feelings across.