027. Replacement

Sep 06, 2008 22:39

100 SuJu fic challenge
Author: knightkitten
Archive: here
Prompt: 027. Replacement - Kibum/Heechul, ?/Heechul
Words: 1964
Rating/Warning: R/mildly graphic sex
Summary: Kibum's been trying to replace Heechul only to find Heechul's given up on him.

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panda3035 September 6 2008, 15:04:16 UTC
omg!!!! no!!! i hate this because i love both pairings!! omg.. make a fic with the three as pairings!

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knightkitten September 6 2008, 15:06:12 UTC
Forgive me? I fully intended for it to be Kibum and Heechul all the way, but Hankyung snuck in somewhere after Kibum was being a jerk. Thanks for the read!

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wildcosmos September 6 2008, 16:34:09 UTC
Soooo good! ;A; I loved the angst, poor Heechul...
Hankyung's last line was so powerful! Amazing job!

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blackkikyo September 6 2008, 17:03:57 UTC
Omg, so sad :___: And yet so beautiful in a way.

Great job on this fic, I think my heart cracked a bit at the end.. Poor Kibum.. But I almost feel that Heechul is in an even worse position...

Gah! It was perfect .___.!

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nyappyx3 September 6 2008, 17:35:34 UTC
Wow. This was so good but so...;_;

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kim_hae_eun September 6 2008, 19:24:28 UTC
why bummie?? why'd you have to go off and be a jerk?? cuz you thought that he couldnt love you like the way you love him, you wanted him to hate you just as much so he'll think of you?? you'll be number one in his heart, even if its cuz of hate??

gahhh!!!!!!! i really dont no if i shuld cry cuz kibum's a total jerk, hurting heechul who loves him back or jump for joy for hannie takin the initiative for saving chullie and starting somethin together!!

n e ways, ♥ good ♥ job!!♥

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