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All In Good Fun II

Dec 11, 2008 17:42

Title: All In Good Fun II

Author:
regularbean

Summary: Patrick ends up exactly where he thought he didn't want to be..

Characters: The Joker, Patrick Bateman

Rating: Nothing but a little violence so far...so I guess R? I don't know. Nice and easy does it, it's working its way up ^^

Disclaimer: Not mine!

( It's up the street... )

fic:bateman/joker, r-rated, series

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regularbean December 12 2008, 00:45:00 UTC

Aw, thanks ^^ It makes me happy to know you are excited about this fic, because it is my first fic series that I've written alone...so it was kind of nerve-wrecking at first, heh! XD

And yeah, I really can do a lot! I wanted to take the time to get a firm, good basis, you know? Now from this point they can have crazy, violent scheming adventures, yay!

rekindle956 December 12 2008, 06:14:16 UTC

He hated whatever girl he was dating at the moment, all her stupid prattling, all her stupid efforts to get bras with better padding to make her boobs bigger. Oh, Patrick.

I really liked this; the way Patrick is thinking, obsessing about it. Joker can surely make him sweat. Love them both.

My true colors: green and purple, and the talk about the moon reminded me of that song "Wrong Number" by The Cure; that was a completely offtopic comment of course.

Also the way Patrick sees Jack's clothes and:
The agent of chaos's features were...strange. The make-up made the Joker appear much older than he actually was. This "Jack" had very smooth features, slightly tanned skin, button nose, curved brows and bright eyes. And that smile, the gruesome extensions to it...they looked even more devastating without the red face-paint smeared across them. He had this hair too, fluffy and blond.I love the details about the City, where the American Gardens Building and The Narrows are.Can't imagine where are you taking them.Thank you so much for writing ( ... )

ehmaz December 12 2008, 06:49:41 UTC

Sooooo many great lines in this! It was great, beginning to end. I loved their little game. Poor Patrick doesn't know how to play properly ;_; The sticky-note in the dictionary was soooo hilarious XD

I think my favorite line was:
"Then he realized that truly he wasn't about to go anywhere, and somehow Jack just knew that."

Yay! Can't wait for the continuation :D