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[knkfics]

Well, here goes. Just as a warning, this chapter made both me and my beta reader cry. Eheh.

Comments

Yumm

[lucichan]

That was... delicious to read. I love how you write death scenes. They always come off so.... eloquent.

Very nice

[pyrrhical]

Very nice. Nice quirk to not allow the bed to smell like Rowan anymore; you'd think it smelling like him would hurt worse, but you have to really wonder.

Great job at the surrealism (if it was really meant to be that) -- it was almost like you were there.

. . .I think I read that faster than I've read anything since the Nightrunner series. Though I didn't cry, it moved me quite a bit. Wonderful job, like usual. ^^

~Ann Lowe

[rahima04]

*sniff* :(, so sad poor Neil

One thing i'm still not sure about is if he died 3 months after, why the 4 year age diffrence?, ah well

[rosequeen2024]

i would usally say something like its so saqd i could almost cry but wont but now i really am crying,anyway great chapter

[sabishiisakura]

o dear god. i'm on prozac *and* effexor and that was still hella depressing. i think i may need to take a break from reading and watching some happy shoujo anime -.-; Wow. Mum thinks i'm strange enough without me starting to cry after staring at my notebook.