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Mar 24, 2004 19:13

Well, I said to myself late last night "I'll re-read this chapter of Eventide tomorrow and proofread it and do minor edits, thne post it." And now we're at tomorrow, and I'm so. Tired. And... my reaction upon trying to edit was "Hey... words are thingy ( Read more... )

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anonymous March 24 2004, 17:37:23 UTC
Just out of curiosity, is it possible for you two to end a chapter in this story that /isn't/ a cliff-hanger? ::twitches:: I mean, that was wonderful. I love Rowen and Neil. They are cute. But for god's sake, talk about nerve wrecking.

::clings to characters::

On the other hand it is good to hear that there will be two more chapters instead of just the one. Such scary cliff-hangers. Excuse me while I go fear for the next chapter?

-FiveStarLoony

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andrews23 March 24 2004, 18:41:31 UTC
Oh lord... I just know that something will happen that will involve that balcony. *shivers* Wonder what's the deal with the ghost, though. I thought it would be only on Rowan's eighteenth b-day?

Please please post the next chapter soon? This really is nerve wrecking

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red_rockstar March 24 2004, 21:57:40 UTC
i concur! as soon as i read that line about the balcony, i said to myself "if that isn't foreshadowing with a mack truck I don't know what is."

man, there are going to be a lot of side story smut for this..

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kouriarashi March 25 2004, 08:37:34 UTC
Heh, not *that* much side story smut. I am writing the original dream scene where they have sex after the prom, but that's the only smut I intend to write for Rowan and Neil. Sorry to disappoint. ^_^

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andrews23 March 24 2004, 22:27:50 UTC
Ack, agreed. Reading that line made me go "Jesus, Rowan! STAY AWAY FROM THE BALCONY!!" Aah, the ghost is scary!! ::chews on her blanket in fear::

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millynz March 24 2004, 19:39:00 UTC
OooooooooOOOoooooo*is excited*
That was so good!! Write quickly please, I can't stand waiting after a cliffhanger like that.
~Milly(anxiously waiting)

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slytherinblack March 24 2004, 20:03:38 UTC
Eeeeee, Kouri, Kouri, you big meanie. ;_; Post more soon, soon please! *sounds like a five year old* Eeep, sorry.

I'm sad it's almost about to end, though. *blinks*

I'm puzzled as to why the ghost didn't try anything when he first showed up, though. I mean, was he just standing there staring Neil into wakefulness?

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kouriarashi March 24 2004, 20:16:40 UTC
::piku:: No, I mean, he woke up just as the ghost got there. The ghost had only been in the room a few seconds.

....that'll probably be clearer once you read the beginning of the next chapter, because the ghost was just about to act before Neil woke up. ^_^

::is evil, goes back to lynchproof bunker::

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slytherinblack March 24 2004, 22:58:25 UTC
Ohhhhh okay. I get it now. It seemed like he woke up and the ghost was just standing there staring at him. Heh. ^^;
Lynchproof bunker? I need to get me one of those...

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anonymous March 24 2004, 20:49:38 UTC
Well, now i don't know what to think. I desperately yearn for the next chapter ( it wont be another ~20 days will it?!) yet I'm filled with terrible trepidation about the thought of no more Rowan and Neil. Guess there's always rereading. Go Kouri and Karasu!!

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kouriarashi March 25 2004, 08:36:43 UTC
It won't be another 20 days, I assure you. 26 is already half done and I hope to have it up this weekend. ^_^

....and just because I *am* a picky bitch, Eventide is by me. And me alone. Not me and Karasu. Karasu and I coauthor FIG. Eventide is just me. ^_^;;;

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anonymous March 26 2004, 18:33:06 UTC
Sorry about that. Now that I think about it, you've mentioned that before, haven't you? Sorry. My memory is appalling.

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