fic - "you and i, learning to speak."

Jul 06, 2012 22:58

you and i, learning to speak.
PG-13 · 8408 words · EXO
Baekhyun/Chanyeol

Chanyeol leaves the country to find himself, Baekhyun doesn't know how much he needs Chanyeol until he does, and none of his friends give him good advice. AU, established relationship.

note: Largely inspired by my psychotic text post full of revelations on Tumblr, idek ( Read more... )

p: baekhyun/chanyeol, f: exo, what the fuck did i just write, - fic, idk man idk

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minwhore July 7 2012, 06:10:16 UTC
CRYING OMFG WHAT IS THIS FIC oifjawoeifj

idek what i just read but oh gawd it was good that's all i remember and coherency has pretty much fled at this point cries so don't expect to understand anything

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it's safe to say that i'm pretty much drowning in feels rn and halp i can't get up ;;;;;;

but yes, hi, this fic is good (understatement) and you're an awesome writer ;~~~~~;

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knotweed July 7 2012, 12:40:20 UTC
um GURRRRRL did you and i read two different things because look at urself
hahaha jk! but thank you so much aaahhh omg ;; you are too kind!! ♥

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shizukusa July 7 2012, 06:45:37 UTC
i love this :) this was very sweet, and weirdly enough this is pm how i see baekhyun and chanyeol's relationship working out (if they were in a long-term relationship lmao) -- i feel like the way you wrote the two of them was pretty spot on, what with chanyeol's independent nature and baekhyun's dependence on chanyeol/his being lost without chanyeol ("Remember when I had to grab you by the arm when we were going into the city for the first time" i assume this is referencing the bajillions of airport photos where chanyeol's holding on to a lost-looking baek haha :D :D i do feel though that chanyeol's a bit clingy himself (apparently it makes him "feel safe" or sth?) but yeah, baekhyun's pretty much a lost puppy). and um this is quite how i see their personalities play off against each other. i love chanyeol's spontaneity (...and escapism) and the gnome part is just ridiculous and weird and very chanyeol! i love the way baekhyun handles chanyeol's departure/their insecurity and how, in the end, he'll always accept chanyeol no matter ( ... )

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knotweed July 7 2012, 15:19:00 UTC
aww, thanks so much, you have no idea how much this means to me! :) ♥

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zeraiya July 7 2012, 08:04:11 UTC
I'm going to go and throw myself off a staircase because this fic was so heartbreakingly beautiful and I just don't know what to do with all of my feels now. Do I drown in them or?

But seriously, props on writing this - I really admire people who think outside of the box, and that's what you've done here. I think too many people have tunnel vision when it comes to relationships and don't think about factors and emotions that can affect them. Most people just have this unconscious belief that once you're in a relationship you're happy forever unless a massive tragedy strikes or someone has an affair. Which is completely not true - well else would so many couples break up every day. I digress ( ... )

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knotweed July 7 2012, 13:23:36 UTC
no suicide via staircase please ( ... )

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knotweed July 7 2012, 13:25:44 UTC
whoops, i meant that people are **selfish in the second big paragraph!

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meltrules July 7 2012, 09:17:49 UTC
cries dies and buries myself in this fic bc omg this was so amazing :')
memmed! ♥ this was beautiful thank you so much ;~~;

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knotweed July 7 2012, 13:05:07 UTC
gurrrrrrl why are you thanking me, i should be thanking you!! i'm so glad you liked it :) ♥

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daaiiixd July 7 2012, 11:16:00 UTC
FML SRSLY MY HEART'S STILL BEATING FAST
LSZDKJ;ADALIJDLAKD IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY

& I EVEN TRIED READING THIS WHILE LISTENING TO FALL BY ED SHEERAN AND ;DKLADJLAJKDAKJDKLAJDJAD GAWSH

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS.

/ADDS THIS FIC TO MY LIST OF FAVE FICS/

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knotweed July 7 2012, 13:03:10 UTC
ed sheeran is amaaaazing.
i love you so much for reading! thank you so much :) ♥

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