D.Gray-man fic

[knowing_shadows]

This is the fault of reading about 100 chapters of the manga in a short space of time, and then 

Comments

Here via the Allen x Kanda comm

[lanjelin]

Well, I can tell you that you're probably the best writer in the fandom already, heh.

I think you did a wonderful job with this, both technically and character-wise. Especially Kanda was amazingly IC; I can easily imagine his canon self acting this way in a relationship.

I also think the "I love you" worked very well the way you used it; it felt real, and I thought it fit. And again, Kanda's reaction to the situation was perfect.

My only complaint might be that Allen is a just a little bit too passive, maybe.

I fervently hope that you decide to write more Kanda/Allen in the future!

Re: Here via the Allen x Kanda comm

[knowing_shadows]

Thank you!

I agree with you about Allen. Some other people commented on his passiveness as well - I kind of neglected Allen in favour of Kanda because I thought it would be harder keeping Kanda IC lol.

[alita_b_angel]

Fantastic, I'm always glad to see new fic from you, and D-grayman's a baby fandom still for me, but as far as I can see, you have them spot on, and believable enough I could jump on board the porn relationship. I like it. Kanda was amazingly hot. XD

[knowing_shadows]

It's still a baby fandom for me lol! I'd seen the first half of the anime and read a few chapters of the manga a while back, but then suddenly I decided to read the whole thing online about a week ago in a day, so I'm still getting my head around it all.

So this was more of an attempt to get a hold on their characters than proper fic, I think.

Thanks for commenting :D

[izelmecatl]

I loved it~! they seemed to be iC the entire time i read this, you did an amzing job that's for sure~!

LOL, "I didn’t want all of his dialogue to be “STFU I HATE YOU ALL”, which pretty much IS like that already! :D

[knowing_shadows]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[sommar]

Thank you for this! I loved it so much and I adore you for how you wrote Kanda ^o^
“Fuck - just - shut up and let me concentrate,” *LOL*
I can soooo imagine him saying that! XD

[knowing_shadows]

Thank you! Glad you liked Kanda in this - I was worried about writing him the most!

[romalo]

I just started reading in this fandom and I gotta say this is one hell of an introduction. I can't wait to read more of your fics seeing as how I really loved this. You wrote true to the characters and it made me grin and gave me fuzzy feelings, lol. Amazing job! :D

[knowing_shadows]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :D