Comments | knowledge3754: the rhyme i mentioned last entry

knowledge3754

the rhyme i mentioned last entry

Oct 29, 2005 19:34

written to cannibal ox's song called pigeon. kinda in the same vein also. i was feelin really depressed that day ( Read more... )

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insolence624 October 30 2005, 18:37:20 UTC

I think it's really good, but honestly 1) you can do better; 2) you had doper shits in cyphers; 3) it ain't easy to outshine Vast on this beat

and that beat imo isn't made for depressed lyrics, comes good with crazy shit a-la can ox

change ur icon. that guy's scary knowledge3754 October 31 2005, 05:17:50 UTC

damn that hurts...i think ur right tho, i have done better lyrically. and i def know i cant outshine vast OR vordul. i dont know about it not being a depressing-content-type-of-beat tho, cuz when i listen to the song i get depressed. its can ox describing the ills of the hood, ya its crazy ish but its sad.

Re: change ur icon. that guy's scary insolence624 October 31 2005, 06:58:27 UTC

okay I will change the icon lol
well I guess it depends with what mood u come up with listening to songs... to me it sounds even upbeat a bit
anyways, hope to hear some new good shit from u soon

Re: change ur icon. that guy's scary knowledge3754 October 31 2005, 12:07:52 UTC

but u know what the songs about dont u? def not upbeat stuff