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knowmonsta

[One-Shot] Seasons

Jan 15, 2014 22:15

Seasons
Suho/Kai / PG-13 / 3,028 words / Romance
Summary: The cycle of Joonmyun and Jongin's relationship. Companion to " Swings".

( The first day of spring arrives with the sun shining through the curtains and the sound of birds chirping their morning song, and Jongin wants to rip the month of April off of his calendar. )

genre: romance, group: exo, rating: pg-13, pairing: suho/kai

Comments 10

1beinghated January 16 2014, 06:33:39 UTC

jfc don't do this. DON'T.

you know, for some reason, don't judge me please haha, but taemin's and kai's friendship just rubbed me the wrong way when I first heard about idk why though but this. this kind of makes me want to pet taemin's face and call him adoring nicknames HAHAHA

just- why. it was so niceeeee their relationship WHYYY but at least it ended well TT TT

knowmonsta January 17 2014, 04:29:35 UTC

I had to do the angst. I was in my head. I'm sorry. ;~;

Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :D

cairistiona January 16 2014, 10:27:01 UTC

angstangstangstohokaythere

It reads a lot smoother now! ^^ It's definitely alternative to mine. ;)

knowmonsta January 17 2014, 04:30:35 UTC

Imsorryihadtodoitbutitendedwell.

I'm glad! I kept reading it and going "this sounds really choppy".

Thank you so much for all of your help and for reading it! I really appreciate it! ♥

beoutiful January 18 2014, 01:00:24 UTC

my heart was clenching the entire time i was reading this huuu thanks for this!

knowmonsta January 18 2014, 04:40:56 UTC

Your icon is so cute. ♥

And I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :D

fcukai January 18 2014, 20:46:13 UTC

;;
This is breaking my heart.
Poor Jongin, tho it's not really fair to aim his hatred towards Junmyeon. I'm sure he's already suffering himself.
Sad, but really really well-written and purposes a very interesting theory.
Enjoyed it ^^ Thank you for sharing.

knowmonsta January 20 2014, 22:33:46 UTC

It seems to be breaking a lot of hearts. ;~;

But I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate it! :D

yumi_maki January 19 2014, 21:37:21 UTC

Yaaaaaay. Thank you for linking me. I'm glad you posted it. :D ( ... )

knowmonsta January 20 2014, 22:39:32 UTC

I'm just glad you read it after the super long delay in finishing it. XD

And I'm happy that you liked the format. I was worried it would be strange. And I'm glad that both Suho and Kai's feelings and sides of the story were done well, as I was afraid it would be too Kai-centric.

And lol I figured that the ending would seem rushed. I attempted to write a longer ending but it sounded too cheesy in my mind. I have a problem with ending things well and I'll keep that in mind when writing future stories.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a great review! I appreciate it a lot! ♥