No Se Porque

[kntuckyfrydnick]

See, I haven't been completely unproductive lately. Here's a new song I wrote that I really like...

No Se Porque

Bride and groom, fancy hotel room

Making love in the early morning

She falls asleep to Spanish novellas

He sips his tea and kisses her eyes

He looks at her long without her knowing

Leaves his wedding ring by her side

He walks the

Comments

[kitelinescrossd]

Oh my...this is wonderful.

[kntuckyfrydnick]

Thanks Sah. My housemates have said this is my best song yet, so I can't wait to play it for ya.

<3Nick

[kitelinescrossd]

I can't wait to hear it. This time I promise I won't get upset first ;)

[zenbohemian]

lovely nick, u old bard u...

u tell a sad, but lovely tale...

i wonder how much of it is autobiographical?

keep writing amigo...

-emeric

[lovemotionstory]

this is really nice, the subject matter reminds me of neruda. you should post the song, if you ever record it. for some reason, i could figure it as sounding like something bright eyes would make.. again, maybe because of the subject matter.