Title - Mapping The Abyss (01/?)
Author -
koihitoyoRating - NC-17 overall.
Genre - Au.
Warnings - Murders, blood, sex, violence, unbeta-ed, English is not my first language, so any mistakes are more than human.
Pairings - Aoi x Uruha, Ruki x Reita
Summary -This is Uke Yutaka, and I'm standing here with Takashima Kouyou also known as Uruha. Partner of the
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*bows to the deity of the Pee Sanctuary*
Well, I have to say that I like how it begins; I'm kinda keen on the stories that start with the end, it gives a whole different feeling to the story. 8D
Too bad that Aoi is already dead >_< So, if Uruha is still alive, I suppose that it's because Aoi was doing most of the job and Uruha was just an accomplice...
Kai as a journalist, I like it 8D that's where he belongs... Where there's no sex and only smiles *evil laugh* XD
And he gave me a hand with my job… Please don't mix it in your book with handjob. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD awesome line 8DDD
And now, we have to figure out who Ruki and Reita are, and what happened to them.. Probably both dead... Dunno...
Do I need to say that I'm looking forward to the next chapter? *sheepish smile*
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Mee too, Actually I like stories that are told backwards 8D but that's too hard to write.
Nee we just have a ghost Aoi roaming everywhere ;^; *hugs the ghost*.. Hmm I guess you'll never know because it's Uruha point of the view so... he may hide some secrets 8D...
And no banana, cucumbers, sausages or anything sexual for the matter 8D.
Ohh you'll soon discover 8D... Soon...
It's going to be up soon 8D But I want to wait a bit 8D! *mean*
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So the story will be written in the first person? (Uru's POV)
The list of forbidden things is still the same 8D (Popsicles are forbidden too xD)
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No but it will happen in his point of view.. Kind of focused more in what his impressions and memories are rather than Aoi's point of view.
Hmm 8DDD But is he allowed to be near by...Potatoes 8D?
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I'm as curious about their story as Kai himself! I like your Uruha with his strange jokes!
And he gave me a hand with my job… Please don't mix it in your book with handjob. This line was priceless!
I can't help but I like his style, and the way he doesn't show his sorrow but tries to impress Kai somehow. I think he likes the thought of having a regular visitor, he has something he can look forward to in his current loneliness.
I wonder what happened to Ruki and Reita? Who are they?
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Yes he needs to show someone that being locked up and an accomplice of murder it's not so freaky and they can be quite...Normal.
And I'm sure it must be lonely to be locked up in such way must be insane. And telling your story to someone it's always good x3....
Oh well get there sweetie x3... Pretty soon!
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