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Nov 01, 2008 22:38

Title: Beg
Author: Emma
Rating: M
Summary: Just something small about how being own can change a person. May continue it later. No Beta! Blah!

( Beg )

Comments 10

missvm November 2 2008, 19:07:49 UTC

I really like your fic !!!
Hope you'll continue XD

koijewel November 2 2008, 21:12:40 UTC

I plan on it. Thanks !!!!

monrque November 4 2008, 02:33:01 UTC

it is very sad good story tho

takara94 November 6 2008, 03:35:09 UTC

Waa~!!! I can't believe I didn't read this~!! It's sooo beautiful~

koijewel November 6 2008, 03:54:23 UTC

Thanks. I have a follow up in the works.

sorona55 November 11 2008, 13:25:53 UTC

Nice sad fic and I really like it! But I wonder why did Asami need another lover if he loved Aki and even called her his pet?

koijewel November 12 2008, 22:40:26 UTC

cause asami got greedy. Evil little man that he is

sorona55 November 14 2008, 09:07:19 UTC

Yeah, but I hope now he understands what treasure he has (I mean Aki):)

greatgaara40 November 24 2008, 08:45:15 UTC

OMG.. I lovvee your style.. fast paced... so much going on.. but I didn't feel "Stuffed"... and love the idea, Aki traumatized, even hospitalized without Asami's presence besides him.. and he came back and found Sea? and afterwards befriend here...brilliant ! "And what if you get tired of me?" .... "I love you idiot." *clapping like mad* Yoshhh.. the confession !!
*bows* thanks for sharing this neee ^_^