Spn Fic: Take Care of You - Chapter 3

Jun 06, 2010 14:01

Title: Take Care of You
Rating: PG13 (Gen)
Characters: Sam, Dean, John, Bobby
Disclaimer: Still not mine, just playing.
Note: Some conversations taken directly from the episode - and I don't really know if that's okay. I know I'm having trouble with my 'tenses' ...and it's hurting my brain. **Thanks to Ziggy.uk for nudging me to continue posting ( Read more... )

supernatural, fanfic

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maxandkiz June 23 2010, 15:55:23 UTC
Cool! Just found this! so glad you decided to continue this one. I love that Sam is hurt too. It was a little hard to believe that he escaped that wreak without any injuries. not with what the car looked like.

vomiting blood? That's definitely not a good sign. Sam needs to get that checked out and fast. :)

Lisa

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kokoda2007 July 22 2010, 13:11:58 UTC
Thanks hon.

I know I've been slack in keeping in touch lately. What can I say, school's killing me, but I know that's no excuse.
I promise to be a better friend:)

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maxandkiz July 24 2010, 03:41:46 UTC
You're a great friend. You're just really busy right now. I definitely know how that is. I'm about to be in that position. School starts August 2 so my free time is about to be cut drastically, especially since I'm back in first grade again. Thank God! I finally made it back home with the decent folks!

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anonymous July 20 2010, 16:03:20 UTC
First of all apologies for only just getting round to reading this chapter, especially after I sent you a ff.net message about it a good 6 weeks ago! In my defence I am not familiar with lj!
Fantastic chapter. Love how it is tied in with IMTOD plus going a little AU with Sam vomiting blood and definitely not okay, a fact with the nurse also noticed. If Sam doesn't start to take it easier things could get bad for the youngest Winchester, but with Dean barely hanging on there is no way Sam is going to let up.
Love your writing and this chapter didn't disappoint. So looking forward to more and hope you do decide to resurrect this on ff.net at some point.
And please let me know when you post the next chapter as would hate to miss it.

Sarah

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kokoda2007 July 22 2010, 13:10:39 UTC
Thanks :)
I have to admit, ff.net scares me at the moment, so (if I post my writing) I just post to this journal. That way, I figure only people that want to read it have to, and then there's no excuse for weird or unfriendly comments. One day I hope to be brave again, but at the moment I'm happy being a writer in the "closet", so to speak.

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loner_wolf August 16 2010, 04:43:59 UTC
Oh gosh, I'm hooked.
I can't wait to see what happens next :)

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cherry916 November 8 2010, 03:15:22 UTC
I had this tagged so LJ would notify me when you posted a new chapter...stupid stupid LJ

I love this story so much.

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kokoda2007 November 12 2010, 08:43:05 UTC
Thank you :)

I haven't abandoned this fic, I'm just weighed down by real life at the moment.

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algum_ser January 7 2011, 19:41:05 UTC
Hey!
I love this story and I hope that you update it soon.
I'm not familiar with LJ and it took me a while to get around to this one.
Been reading your stories from ff.net for a long time now, love them. Hope to see you come back there someday!
Thank you for writing!

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