The Unexpected Horcrux - Chapter the Second (installment)

[kokopelli20878]

I normally didn’t think of myself as an eavesdropper, but some conversations are simply too riveting to ignore.  The day started with me noticing that Harry was eating breakfast in the sun room with a bandaged left hand.  Remus wasn’t living at our haven at the time, but he’d often eat breakfast there, volunteering to fix breakfast if he was

Comments

[crumplehornedki]

I like the whole letter writing for communication between Harry and Lily, and *snerk* Ron doesn't like blondes!

[physicsteach]

OK, this is absolutely fascinating. The reactions of the characters to the situation are quite believable, and I very much enjoy Hermione's perspective on things. She's an excellent choice of viewpoint.

I also like how the horcrux quest is kind of in the background, but still present.

[madderbrad]

I enjoyed Hermione's protest at lying to Harry. That's a lesson they've learned (the hard way) through his reactions in 5th year, so I appreciate your keeping her in character with what has gone before. Hermione of all people would learn her lessons well

blondes

[kokopelli20878]

Hermione, unconsciously, was looking like a version of Lavender Brown, ten years older.

I'll have to make that more clear.