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Bits and Pieces, chapter 1

Apr 14, 2007 23:39

Title: Bits and Pieces
Author: Kokura
Pairing: YuurixWolfram
Rating: T
Warnings: Maou!Yuuri, randomness, implication, and innuendo
Disclaimer: A peach blossom falls;
Alas! For I do not own
Kyou Kara Maou.
Summary: Short, writer's block destroying stories based on prompts and snippets given. Mostly ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, pairing: yuuri&wolfram, length: oneshot, notice: unlocked, universe: bits and pieces, fandom: kkm, fic: bits and pieces

Comments 10

^____^o duochan_maxwell April 18 2007, 22:59:50 UTC

Heheheh I've already said it in FF.Net, but I'll say it again...
LOVED this fic!!! You wrote it just the way I like it ^_^
But thinking now...yeah, I'm a bit slow because english isn't my motherlanguage XDDD...there is only a single mistake at my fav part of this fic...that funny math of Maou's pervness...I may be wrong, but the correct is "unfair", not "unjust"

Anyway, this is not enough to spoil the fic

THANKS FOR SHARING!!!

Re: ^____^o kokura April 21 2007, 23:39:18 UTC

Actually, "unfair" and "unjust" are both correct, but "unfair" feels slightly more casual to me, and I've always felt that the Maou is a very...formal-ish type of person, so I chose to use unjust. It's a bit archaic, which may be why you didn't recognize it at first. Thank you for your feedback, tho'; it means a lot to me!

Lovely animefreak03 May 2 2007, 00:47:51 UTC

Very Well done. I'm simply happy to have read this. Great job.

Re: Lovely kokura August 10 2007, 02:22:14 UTC

Thanks so much! Uh...sorry it took so long to get back to you. XD

Did you read the second chapter? At the risk of sounding like a desperate self-fic-pimper (which I am, but still...), I personally like it better than this one, even if the formatting (which looked SO much better on MSWord, by the way) is a bit wonky. XD

sexy_dark_mousy June 11 2007, 04:17:43 UTC

XDDDDDD

The word problem was so awesome (coming from the girl who hates normal word problems from the depth of her...knee)!

And one would have gotten one's answer when the darker personage shuddered and screamed, "JUSTICE!" out to the night.

XDD Best Maou justice scene ever. <333

kokura August 10 2007, 02:55:44 UTC

Ahhh, yesss. I personally thought that the word problem was the best part of the whole thing, even if it was a bit oddly worded. The 'justice' scene is what I came up with with my friends during a very, very odd conversation that basically revolved around what certain characters would scream at climax. I decided that the Maou would probably scream "Justice!" because, as everybody knows, he totally has a (hawt) justice fetish. Some others we figured out were Squall 'Leon' Leonhart's from FFVIII and KH; either a very loud ellipsis "...!" or "Whatever!", Gwendal's would be "Paperwork!", and Gunter's would be "Heika!". XD

akayalovesyaoi June 15 2007, 01:35:15 UTC

hahahah, I like it, it's funny and quite sexy I must say :D

kokura August 10 2007, 02:57:51 UTC

Thank you! Ha, that's what I was trying for!

hikki_passion August 9 2007, 22:01:47 UTC

Oh! This fic is so awesome! <3

(And I just wanted to let you know that I recently fell in love with your fics and that is why you will see random comments from me everywhere... its not because I'm a stalker...)

kokura August 10 2007, 03:55:31 UTC

Haha, I'm flattered! Stalking is...also flattering, but in a SLIGHTLY different way. I'm glad you're not a stalker then. XD

I'm so happy that you've fallen in love with my fics! That's my goal as a writer, you know. Oh, and by the way, on a completely unrelated subject, Draco Malfoy is my absolute favorite character. Even if he wasn't the loveable brat he is, I would adore him on the basis of his name alone. Just look at the poem on the right sidebar, if you haven't seen it already -->