Shadow Part 2/5

Mar 05, 2010 18:51



Title: Shadow
Genre: Romance/Angst.
Pairing: TezuFuji. Slight ShiraiFuji.
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 3444
Summary: Feudal Japan AU. TezuxFuji. Slight ShiraixFuji. Because he was the Emperor's kagemusha, the Emperor's shadow, the Emperor's sacrifice. Because Tezuka was his samurai, his light, his protector. And because they loved.

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lovefujitez March 6 2010, 03:33:30 UTC
(ʘ_ʘ) I heard Fuji's heart-wrenching, painful screams and saw Tezuka's desperate, gaze... OMG this chapter is so painful to read, because I could feel the emotions going through the two men.

So great, I am loving this story so much...you have such a wonderful style of writing, the emotions you've managed to stir inside me, at one point, almost in tears and pained because in a way I witnessed Fuji's suffering through your words... *cries now*

Oh dear, I am getting caught up in my own crazy emotions, gomen...I can't wait for the next chapter... wonderful story.

Thank you for sharing!

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kolachess March 6 2010, 04:01:04 UTC
It was painful (yet a pleasure) to write as well. I'm touched that you can feel something through my chapters, that means a lot. :)

Thank you for reading!

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lovefujitez March 6 2010, 14:27:57 UTC
I was just re-reading my comment, I hope I didn't read being awful, I love the chapter with every part from beginning to the end...all the scenes seemed to blend together ---making sense and the events were placed in right sequence --- the result, the effect on the reader so deep ...I guess I am just moved when I read something good...truly appreciate it!

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kolachess March 6 2010, 15:21:21 UTC
I understood. :) And I really appreciate your compliment. I'm very glad you like it!

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jadeskye79 March 6 2010, 03:51:44 UTC
Oh my god...
*sigh* the fluff :)
Love this story, looking forward to the next chapters

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kolachess March 6 2010, 05:58:48 UTC
thank you! And the next chapter will be coming out next week...>.< it's being written.

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paranoid_fridge March 6 2010, 08:58:20 UTC
*wonderful*

I really, really loved reading this chapter. The Tezuka-Fuji interaction was great, Shiraishi's instructions to Tezuka plain awesome and the flashbacks to childhood fantastic. ^__^

And I'm very much looking forward to seeing more of this!

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kolachess March 6 2010, 15:17:46 UTC
thank you! And I can't wait for your next chapter of What Should Have Never Been Found!

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tacuma811 March 6 2010, 12:32:39 UTC
Omg, I could almost hear Fuji's cries. I can understand Tezuka will never be able to forget them. That part was really beautiful. I also love Tezuka and Fuji making out XD Both of them lose control, until reality takes away their passion. I really like how you mixed the flash backs into this story <3

Btw, I'm writing a story and that also has a part about Tez and Fuji as kids where Fuji gives Tezuka candy >_< It's based on a song. It's just a little part in the whole fic. I hope you don't mind

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kolachess March 6 2010, 15:18:47 UTC
thanks for reading! And aw...that's so cute! I will definitely check it out. Chibi-Tezuka and Fuji are just great!

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loki_lee March 6 2010, 13:22:23 UTC
SUKISHO~! I LOVED THAT SHOW~~!!!!

Anyway yeah, ADOWABLE KIDS~!! Ow.. Breaking Fuji's leg >__________< Painful~ But yeah. I love candy~♥♥

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kolachess March 6 2010, 15:19:13 UTC
Lol, I love candy too. Thanks for reading!

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