Shadow Part 3/5

[kolachess]

Title: Shadow
Genre: Romance/Angst.
Pairing: TezuFuji. Slight ShiraiFuji.
Rating: PG-13.
Word Count: 3787
Summary: Feudal Japan AU. TezuxFuji. Slight ShiraixFuji. Because he was the Emperor's kagemusha, the Emperor's shadow, the Emperor's sacrifice. Because Tezuka was his samurai, his light, his protector. And because they loved.

Link to previous parts

Comments

[tacuma811]

Omg, angsty! O_o I want Tezuka and Fuji to be happy together and live (or both die)
You have to update soon, because I want to know what will happen next. There was so much love in this chap, but at the same time, so much pain. I really have to know how this will continue.

[kolachess]

I want them to be happy together too! (What I want and what I get aren't always the same thing though. O.O) Hopefully I'll have chapter four out...sometime. I already know chapter five!

[tacuma811]

You better give us a happy ending! Please? *puppy eyes*

[kolachess]

Haha...I can't make promises. :) We'll see!

[sano_fujitezu]

Oh please let them have a happy ending!! *sigh* So many people are after Fuji here... I hope Tezuka can protect him well...

Write more please!!

[kolachess]

I can't make promises but there will be happiness too. There needs to be some contrast here. Yes! Big bad samurai - Tezuka will protect his Fuji...

[lovefujitez]

Another wow...I have told you before, you have such beautiful writing style...this is awesome. Yes the yearning for each other is so strong and how I love the scenes, every one of them that you presented in this chapter.

I feel so bad for Taka-san but Fuji belongs to Tezuka...I am glad they found that moment to share but I see some kind of foreshadowing here and I am worried because you seem to be pointing to a possibility of Fuji dying in the end...*cries* I hope not...

I look forward to the happy chappie following this one...

GREAT JOB! Thank you for creating this story and sharing with us!

Cheers,

j

[kolachess]

Thank you so much for your kind words! I won't spoil anything. :3 Though I was wondering if I painted Taka-san sort of 'in-love with fuji'? I didn't mean to. Well, subconsciously I did. But I tried not to. O.o

Still....thank you for reading!

[paranoid_fridge]

Wow.

That was another amazing chapter. I like how you played with the timeline, with Fuji's, Shiraishi's and Kawamura's scenes all starting at different points. And I Kawamura's perspective on everything was moving indeed...

The assassination attempt felt like a prelude to what else might come (though I'm probably wrong here)... and while the angst is heavy, I enjoyed the foreshadowing in the last part thoroughly. And I'll be looking forward to seeing the next chapter of this!

and good luck with your tests XD
edited because I can't spell...

[kolachess]

Thank you! I have a tiny obsession with non-linear story mode sometimes. :3. Foreshadow...not going to comment on that. :D Don't worry. Next chappie will be happy. I hope. I'm making myself make it happy.

And thanks. Though I take TezuFuji over SATs anyday. >.