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Feb 16, 2014 19:42

Title: History
Pairing: J-Hope/Suga friendship
Rating: PG-13, for language
Summary: I don't think it's a secret that I love Hoseok and Yoongi's bffery. This is the backstory to how they end up in BTS together.

The problem with Jung Hoseok is that he’s freaking adorable. )

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anryo4 February 17 2014, 08:24:19 UTC
F**k, this was good. It was really, really sweet. I still don't know their personalities that well, but what you wrote really seems to fit. Your writing is absolutely fabulous - smooth, though a little abrupt at times, but that fits this sort of memoir. Succinct, but with enough detail and intent to give the Namjoon, Hoseok, and Yoongi personality.

Have you thought about writing longer stories? I feel you could do some really great stuff. Have to write a little less in passive voice, maybe - passive can be exhausting in longer formats - but I would love to read more of what you have!

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sugakookies February 17 2014, 12:10:37 UTC
awww i really liked this.
I'm sorry i don't have anything constructive to say ;~;

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lovebeat_down February 18 2014, 02:32:40 UTC
Dude, their friendship and dysfunctional family and yoongi being a tsundere
I love your characterizations <3

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shoulderhyung February 19 2014, 05:06:46 UTC
Hoseok makes a strangled sort of whining sound, somehow ending up at the bottom of the couch pile and Yoongi decides it's time to intervene. "Ya, ya, let's not kill anyone before we debut!"

Hoseok's hand shoots out of the pile and wraps around Yoongi's forearm. "Hoseok, don't you fucking-" is all he gets out before there's a war-cry and his vision is filled with pillows and Hoseok's crazy smile.

this was my favourite part! i could completely see that happening and the maknae line are like a three part physical embodiment of nuclear war. i love sugahope friendship and romance and just fic about them in general thank you for writing this!

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anonymous May 15 2014, 00:22:31 UTC
this was so good! i loved it

"He suddenly feels guilty for avoiding Hoseok after he first joined and imagines Hoseok crying, alone in his bunk and just wishing for a friend."

that line broke my heart tho t__t

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