Welcome to Mizer House, Ch. 13A/x

Oct 02, 2010 23:37

Title: Welcome to Mizer House
Chapters: 13A/x
Author: konicoffee
Genre: School life, Slice of Life, Drama, AU, Humor?, Crack with Plot, Smut (some chapters)
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters in this story, and I don't own The Lord of the Rings.
Warnings: Extreme OOC-ness, language, smut
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: For this chapter - ( Read more... )

pairing: tora/kazuki, [fic], pairing: hiroto/jin, artist: crossover, pairing: uruha/aoi

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konicoffee October 2 2010, 17:04:38 UTC
No, I don't, but I'm very happy you think so. Thank you so much. X333

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yoshilei October 2 2010, 17:07:20 UTC
Im not usually that bothered about Aoi/Uruha pairings, but your Aoi and Uru turn me into this
-> -/////- ... (Depiction of melted, passed out Yoshi)
I was so embaressed when i realised Jin and Pon wernt even dooooooing it! DDD8>
Nyaaaa pwease mooore, i luvs chur works!! ^//^

<33 xx

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konicoffee October 2 2010, 17:17:32 UTC
I do feel a little bad about the lack of Hiroto/Jin porn. x__x I'll probably write it in another side chapter. That way they would have been dating, and they'd have a semblance of an excuse to do it, yesh? :3

And I'm so glad you liked Aoi/Uruha here. X3 I've never written seme!Uruha before, so I was a tad nervous about this (well I do have an Uruha/Aoi fic somewhere in my archive, but they didn't really do anything, so I don't think that counts). I'm happy it worked for you. X3

I shall write more~ thank you so much!

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yoshilei October 2 2010, 17:23:11 UTC
Eeeee yesh! ^//^
Ahh, well you wrote it very well, i think its the first time i thought a sex scene was just as hilarious as it was arousing XDDD just they're banter and all that during, i mean. :33

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konicoffee October 2 2010, 17:53:45 UTC
Ahahaha XD yep, hot and funny was exactly what I was going for with this scene. Yay~ X3

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pucchan_17 October 2 2010, 18:48:45 UTC
I thought Jin and Hiroto was doing something more than a massage...I can see that I'm wrong lol. XDDD
I WANT A MASSAGE TOO~~~ O3O

Uruha/Aoi... ///w///
I rarely read Uru/Aoi smex but this one is reaaaaaally good. XDD
it's so funny how they're still cursing each other whil *cough*fucking*cough*~ XDD

okay last one...
Tora/Kazuki.. can't comment properly.. *nosebleed* *faints in pool of bloods*

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konicoffee October 3 2010, 02:43:00 UTC
A massage from Hiroto would be...*melts* YUSS. o///o anyways, I'm happy the Uruha/Aoi smex worked for you. Figured Uruha should have his turn being boss. He can't bottom all the time, right? XD

And Tora/Kazuki...I'm not sure how it ended up being that dirty, but I'm glad you liked it. XD

Thanks so much~ ♥

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1337_lurker October 2 2010, 20:24:09 UTC
YESSS OOH YESS AOI GOT SERVED!
Porn was amazing, like what, 3 fucks in one chapter? lol, I feel worn out.

I approve of your seme!Uruha. I hope he buttsexes Aoi more often now. xD
lol at Elizabethan dialogue. I can just imagine Tora talking like that with a shitty British accent over his terrible engrish.

OMG I LOVE HOW KAZUKI WAS HUNG UP OVER AOI. lmao, I made a twitter connection.

loveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveyou. ♥

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konicoffee October 3 2010, 02:58:40 UTC
HOORAY. XD seme!Uruha was a lot of fun to write (although I didn't know what the hell I was doing and if people would like it lol). I'm glad you approve. :3

And LOL yes, I got the idea of Kazuki liking Aoi from RL Kazuki. The guy is a huge Aoi fanboy. With his little Aoi shrine with Aoi's guitar picks on them. XD

ILY TOO~ ♥

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iscreamboo October 2 2010, 20:36:57 UTC
HirotoxJin scene:
"This reminds me of somethin--OH! ...THAT. XP"
Haha. I loooved this part. It brings back good memories...only the massage that happened in reality was nowhere near sexy or sexual like the one with HiroPon and Jin. XD

And I looove your UruhaxAoi/AoixUruha scenes. They're so adorable! ...and fucking hot. :3

Tora's archaic Japanese made me fall over in giggles(:

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konicoffee October 3 2010, 03:39:52 UTC
These days, everything I imagine Hiroto doing is sexy, so I tried to make the massage scene a little naughty despite the lack of porn. XD I'm glad you liked that part. :3

And yaaay I'm happy you liked the Uruha/Aoi scene. I wasn't sure what I was doing with seme!Uruha, but reading about people liking him makes me relieved. XD

Thanks so much. X3

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