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[kookookachubabe]

I want to dress up nice
Spend hours on my hair
Hate my makeup, reapply it
Even though you would not care
I want to go to Dinner
A nice old fancy place
We'll talk about the little things
That makes our love the best
I want to see a movie
And Cuddle in our seats
Wisper things inside your ear
Maybe sneak a little kiss
I want to laugh on our ride home
Then you'll

Comments

[mrfloyd79]

Actually I think it's really good :-) I'm not just saying that either, I used to write poetry like this but I was always too embarrassed to share it. So good for you!

[kookookachubabe]

really?? I never post anything I write because I think it's stupid or just nonsense... thank you!!! do you still write anything?

[mrfloyd79]

It's not stupid at all! You'd be surprised how many guys long for moments like what you wrote about. And no, I really don't write anything anymore, but mainly because I haven't found the inspiration. Most of the poems I used to write were for a girl I talked to online for years. I'd spend hours on only 8 lines just to make it perfect. But reality eventually set in and I was forced to put those wonderful years behind me :-(

[kookookachubabe]

Awww! I was just thinking how much fun it woud be to go on a REAL nice date with a great guy haha, yeah I have been writing a lot lately. Not just poems but just writing about my feelings and how I percieve some things