Essay Contest

[kooziecat33]

We are required to enter two essay contests a semester for english.  Well, here is my first one. Topic: How does your American dream compare to that of your parents?  I warn you, it sucks.  So just keep that in mind before you go expecting something great

America, though still a fairly new nation, has experienced a numerous amount of

Comments

Generation...yes?

[charlie_douche]

It's a good essay. I was distracted at break and lost my train of thought, therefore I forgot to teel you that I think it is good.
The only thing I think you need to change are the words freedom and liberty. Capitolize the first letter in them, and then people will think you are a patriotic little child.
...King Thhings.