All Arashi Pairs Challenge, Fic 2: Sakuraiba

Jul 10, 2012 19:34

I wrote the vast majority of this while medicated and I think it shows.  Mainly because it's my slice of life Ohmiya style just with Sakuraiba. My brain was confused, ok.

Title: Midlife Crisis
Pairings: Sakuraiba, Sho/unimportant OC, Ohmiya
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: Slice of Life, Mild Drama, Mild Angst
Summary:  Aiba finds a salary man with sad eyes waiting ( Read more... )

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pilkul_calpico July 11 2012, 05:04:09 UTC
God I haven't read much in so long! This was a good start!
Insanely sweet and the flow was perfect. I think the lack of defining dialogue to be what made this fic! The little moments and the whole setting and picture completely made this story soft and just heart warming.

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kos_mos26 July 11 2012, 12:35:46 UTC
Hi! That's probably why I haven't seen you around much! I hope you've been well! :D

Sakuraiba is usually a pairing of high intensity, so I was afraid that they would clash with this slow pace. But if it worked for you then I'm pleased XD

Thanks for reading, and it was nice to see you again!

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septemberbabyy July 11 2012, 05:15:51 UTC
This is so beautiful!!! :) I love stories like these that build up nicely and have Arashi characters as regular folks. I have so many favorite parts and lines in this. I especially love how Aiba defines a date as simply spending time together, while Sho defines it as going to the movies, dinner etc, and thinks Ohno is getting conned. LOL! And Aiba as a greengrocer is adorable- love how he operates! And of course, Ohno is perfect operating a fish shop. Would you consider writing a continuation of this? I would love to see how Sakuraiba progresses.

I'm sorry to hear you haven't been well. Hope you are all better now! Thank you so much for sharing this!

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kos_mos26 July 11 2012, 15:42:34 UTC
I'm glad I'm not the only one in love with Arashi holding street jobs. I can't say Sho's idea of what constitutes a date is correct or not, but he's probably right that Ohno's getting conned. XD I'm afraid I hadn't really considered a sequel, but if I did, it would probably end up telling the Ohmiya side of this universe, I'm sorry XD

I'm feeling much better now, thank you. And thank you for reading!

PS: I love your icon <3

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arashic0804 July 11 2012, 05:49:19 UTC
i really really loved the flows of the story..it sound so sakuraiba and yesh i love your aiba so freaking much and i loved this story..thank you for your hard work..your fic reminds me the good time of being in sakuraiba fandom back then ^^v

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kos_mos26 July 11 2012, 15:57:13 UTC
Ah, thank you, I'm glad the pace and my Aiba suited your tastes. There hasn't been many Sakuraiba fics lately has there? A few years ago, it seemed like there was a new one every day, and now they're hardly around at all.

Thank you for reading~

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n3ko_tan July 11 2012, 05:52:57 UTC
Naw~ This fic is just the cutest!! >.<
It makes me think that if Arashi weren't really Arashi today, that this could actually happen ;)
I love how everything just works and seems so realistic and still so true to there personalities.
It is was so enjoyable to read and is now definitely one of my favourites :D
Thank you so much for sharing!
It was an amazing fic about the dearly loved Sakuraiba couple. I'm so glad everything turned out fine in the end for them too ^^

I'm sorry to hear that you are unwell and I hope you get better soon!

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kos_mos26 July 11 2012, 16:14:42 UTC
Awwww, thank you thank you~

I do wonder what Arashi would be like if they weren't Arashi, but if you think this comes close than I know I've done my job with this fic, thank you <3

Lol, it's funny you should mention the happy ending. Originally, I had planned on ending the story at the end of the scene where Aiba was crying to Nino. But that just felt too evil, so I had to change it XD

I'm much better now, thank you for your concern, and thank you again for reading! I'm happy you enjoyed it~! :D

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junbaitarashian July 11 2012, 06:33:12 UTC
Ohmygosh lovely! ;A; I love this to pieces! It's even better than what I expected. Just great T^T better just so much better than how I imagined it.
ugh I can't even
I just have lots if feels right now <3
Thank you so much for writing this. really, from the bottom of squishy heart. *huggles*

Ps. I'm sorry to hear u were at the hospital. But I'm so glad to know you are doing much better! *squishes*

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kos_mos26 July 11 2012, 16:22:13 UTC
Oh good, I was afraid it wasn't what you wanted at all! But I'm happy and relieved that you liked it! Thank you for giving such a wonderful prompt <3

Ps: I'm fine now, thank you XD *hugs back*

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