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CM--Combustion, Part 3

Apr 01, 2011 00:30

Criminal Minds--Combustion, Part 3
Author: kosmickway
Rating: TEEN
Pairing: Rossi/Prentiss
Summary: When an apartment fire renders Emily temporarily homeless, Rossi comes to the rescue.
A/N: For innerslytherin for the Queensland Flood Relief auction ( Read more... )

fan fic--criminal minds, fan fic

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serialbathera April 1 2011, 05:38:19 UTC

A fanfic update from you is always welcome. You write everything so excellently... I like that game it sounds like a fun game, and I can totally see Rossi and Emily playing the game.
Excellent work

kosmickway April 1 2011, 15:58:29 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked! They have a good time together :)

innerslytherin April 2 2011, 18:08:13 UTC

Eeeeeeh! :D This is wonderful! I adore how Dave is acting, the way he's setting her at ease and helping her through all the overwhelming stuff she has to deal with. And I like that she's aware of the idea of keeping professional boundaries...and that she ends up letting them slip anyway. And the game is awesome! :D

*loves*

kosmickway April 2 2011, 23:19:56 UTC

Yay! Glad you liked. I definitely need to figure out where this is going, because I'd like to wrap it up at some point in the next month or so. But right now they're having fun flirting with each other.

innerslytherin April 3 2011, 04:43:52 UTC

LOL I completely understand how you feel about wanting to wrap something up. But I love the flirting and friendship you're building from here, so I'm totally not complaining about many installments. :D

kosmickway April 3 2011, 16:28:22 UTC

I'm loving the way the friendship and flirting are turning out, too. I really didn't expect them to talk to me this way! They're cooperating SO nicely with me on this project... especially since it's the first non-episode related CM fic I've written.

My only worry right now is that I don't want this to get predictable. I don't want it to be the tired "I know we've only lived together a few weeks but suddenly I'm seeing this whole different side of you!" sort of thing. Nor do I want it to become an "Emily wakes up from nightmares of the fire to find Dave holding her" thing. I want it fresh and fun and original ... which it is, so far, but I'm almost afraid of painting myself into a corner, y'know?

Hopefully something will come to me at work tomorrow. They seem to speak to me the most when I'm mindlessly shelving books ;)

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