CM-- Combustion, Part 4

May 27, 2011 12:26

Criminal Minds--COMBUSTION, PART 4:
Author: kosmickway
Rating: TEEN
Pairing: Rossi/Prentiss
Summary: When an apartment fire renders Emily temporarily homeless, Rossi comes to the rescue.
A/N: For innerslytherin for the Queensland Flood Relief auction ( Read more... )

fan fic--criminal minds, fan fic

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serialbathera May 27 2011, 18:23:40 UTC
what a truly excellent next chapter

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innerslytherin June 1 2011, 03:23:44 UTC
NEW CHAPTER WOOHOO!!!!!

often read "Lord of the Rings" aloud to herself (or, increasingly, to Mudge who was spending more time in her room than in Dave's) in a British accent until she fell asleep with the book in her hands.

DUDE! I DO THAT TOO. Are you stalking me? ;)

I like seeing an insecure side to Dave. We all know he has to have one, and I can see him sharing it with Garcia. I also like the parallel of Dave "bullying" Emily and then Garcia bullying Dave into admitting the truth.

I also love the way you incorporated the Doyle story arc. Loving this fic so much, and I am looking forward to more! :D

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kosmickway June 1 2011, 03:33:33 UTC
Who's stalking who? I DO THE LOTR IN BRITISH VOICES, TOO! OMG, I thought I was the only nerdling on the planet who did that to fall asleep!

Well, girlfriend, you're about to get the next chapter ... I'm polishing it as we speak. And they finally finally FINALLY are headed into the bedroom! I knew it was only a matter of time before they got there!

It's flowing SO much better now. It's practically writing itself. Give me another hour or two and the next chapter will be up for you.

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innerslytherin June 1 2011, 03:39:03 UTC
HEEE! You are not alone. :D

I am unlike Emily in that I DO take prescription sleeping pills. And sadly, this one is about to pull me under. But I will be super fantastically thrilled at seeing the next chapter tomorrow!

*HUGS*

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innerslytherin June 1 2011, 03:39:52 UTC
PS!

Garcia's image of them as interlocking puzzle pieces that fit each other perfectly and fit into the bigger puzzle perfectly?

Perfect.

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