Falling Down Like Snow

[kotahcola]

Falling Down Like Snow
1854 words, rated PG
Super Junior: Yesung
Summary: snowy days and revelations of Jongwoon
Notes: This is for the very strange yet beautiful rebreak. She is the reason I do this, so it only seemed fitting that I wrote a story about the beautiful tragedy that is Jongwoon. Enjoy! :)
Also, I think that everyone should read

Comments

[numbuh_009]

I don't even know where to start my comment. I like the repetition of "it is snowing" and how it changes slightly in the last section. The minimal dialogue and gorgeous descriptions really add to the overall atmosphere. I love how he came to meet all the members and when they all converged at the end, it was so heart warming. And the ninja pairings :D Lovely, just lovely.

[kotahcola]

Thanks for reading! =D
I was worried that repeating "it is snowing" would get on people's nerves, but it seemed fitting somehow.
Your comment means so much more than you know, and I must thank you again!

P.S. I love your userpic!

[degnoojosan]

Just one thing to say:

PERFECT

i started with Hey Oh and keep hearing RHCP songs along the fic and... wow it's a beautiful, perfect mix

I liked cuz I almost fell the snow falling out of my house, the white stare everywhere and JongWoon with the feeling of find himself again

Really, I loved it

it came in a good moment

Thanx sweetty

[kotahcola]

You are so welcome. =D
I'm so happy that you enjoyed this story! Thanks for reading! :)
I'm a huge RHCP fan, so if I could spread some love for them and Kyusung at the same time, then I am truly happy!

[gossamereux]

Many many things I love about this. :D
Characterization is so spot on:
Jungsu’s laugh fills the void.
...the shorter dude with brown hair and a dead-fish gaze.
Donghee is a bigger guy with an even bigger personality.
And Kibum, ;______;
I really love how you included all 15 of them but kept everything centered on Jongwoon. :) (There's not enough Yesung-centric fic to go around bias?whatbias?)

Kyuhyun sings out a few notes. His low voice hums right through Jongwoon’s heart. I melted at these lines. ;____; Q, YOUR VOICE RESONATES THROUGH MY HEARTSTRINGS TOO.

They talk about how they’re not sure where they’re going or what they’re going to do. Jongwoon understands. ALWAYS RELATIVE, and that, right there, is how you succinctly captured why I love Jongwoon so much. He's so relatable, with his weirdness, his loneliness, and his occasional i-don't-know-what-the-hell-i-am-doing-but-i-am-having-fun-anyways outbursts. :3

And the repetition was key (no, not a SHINee one), because it tied every paragraph together in cute, neon colored stitches

[kotahcola]

First off, I'm ecstatic to know what you really liked about this story! Thanks for including quotes and your thoughts on them. I reread your comment often and smile! =D
Thanks for complimenting my characterizations. And I agree, there isn't enough Yesung-centric stories out there... :(
When you wroteAnd the repetition was key (no, not a SHINee one), I had no choice but to laugh to myself. I'm glad that you didn't think that the repetition was annoying. I was worried that no one would read it if I kept repeating myself, but I felt that it had to be done.
(And don't forget the sexy singer in his bed, huuuhuu >3) Don't worry, that sexy man can never be forgotten. :) Wookie did play a pivotal role, and thanks for mentioning him in your comment!
All and all, I have nothing but warm wishes and a silly comment to show how much I appreciated what you wrote. Thanks again! *hugs*

[rhenny]

kya!! it's Kyusung!!
really happy reading something like this after a while <3
friends are always there for you to cheer you up!
and there are many other people willing to help you to move on!
glad to see all the members name! ^^,
hope to read more Kyusung from you <3

[kotahcola]

I'm so glad you like it! :)
I tried to incorporate everyone in there. Thanks for appreciating my efforts!
Hopefully, this won't be the last Kyusung from me. =D
Thanks so much for reading and for your comment!

[cookiedrabbles]

Beautiful ㅠㅠ I love how each paragraph starts with the same line but has its own twist, like how Yesung is opening up little by little.

Today, he is falling like the snow. Today, Kim Jongwoon will start to thank Ryeowook for breaking his heart.
Pretty much this <3

[kotahcola]

Thanks for reading and for commenting! :)
I'm so glad that you liked it.
That is one of favorite parts, too. =D