zigzags in the snow; pokeprompts 1st challenge

[kouriko]

It's Apocalyptic-looking outside, so dark I needed to turn on my lights at 3 in the afternoon. It's creeping me out. So anyway...

Here's my first entry for pokeprompts ! I obsessively proofread as usual, but feel free to point out grammar / spelling mistakes, because somehow, I still always miss them. I had such a hard time deciding what pairing I wanted to

Comments

[mangobug]

"really, who could handle Jun partying? She was just getting the hang of interior decorating, not interior destruction." First of all, this line. THIS. <333 So adorable.
I really loved all the different times you wrote about here, it really created two wonderfully rich characters. I really enjoyed this. <3 great job!

[kouriko]

Thank you! I imagine he'd be a little dangerous to have around the house. Haha.

Thanks! ♥

[akumugan]

...inconsistent footprints, smiling and calling him a “dork” under her breath, a whisper as quiet as the hush of the snow with affection as deep as it. AND THIS He smiled at her weak attempts to keep pace with his inconsistent pathways, smiling and calling her “adorable” under his breath, a small murmur filled with so much love. *makes incoherent noise and flails hands pathetically* GAH LOVELOVELOVE

Although my favorite pairing is Kouki/Hikari (Lucas/Dawn)I love this pairing as well and you do them justice! <3 All so wonderfully written and it really gives them depth. Awesome~

[kouriko]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. ♥

[aiki]

Aww... I like these. *_*
Ah, I don't really know anything more useful to say ... orz Sorry.
I think I approve of your headcanon. XD And I like the way you write. :3

[kouriko]

Thanks! ♥

I'm glad. xD Sometimes I'm concerned about my headcanon.

[caddyeverafter7]

I love Twinleafshipping, therefore, I love you :) Best friends forever! Haha, maybe that's getting ahead of myself, like Barry.

I loved this story, it's so cute and sad and just emotional. I wanted to laugh and cry and smile and sob at the same time, which I'm sure would have looked extremely weird. But I really enjoyed reading this and really, I can't wait to see anything else you write. <3

[kouriko]

Aww, thanks! Haha. Any fellow Twinleafshippers are always bffls to me!

♥ Thanks very much! ^^

[ibuberu]

These were really cute! I especially liked #2 and #3 because they were so lovely, with the footprints and the moving in, I was practically gushing at the romance because I love this pair haha. I liked #1 too, but I felt that you could have aged them up a few more years because five-years old seems too young here -- or it could just be me.

[kouriko]

I love this pair, too. I don't know why, but they're one of my favorites. Haha. Thanks! ♥

I just wasn't sure when Hikari's dad...disappeared. xD But yeah, I know what you mean. I kind of felt like they were a little young, too.