actually doing something productive today

[kouriko]

I got a job! \o/ I hope I can keep this one. I start in like three hours, so to pass the time (even though I should really nap, since my mom woke me up at like 7 to get breakfast smh) I'm going to post another fic. It's short, though. I have a super-gigantic one that I should really post first... I'll probably just combine them later when I'm less

Comments

[lark]

THIS IS SO ADORABLE I AM DYING FROM THE FLUFF OH GOD.

In the beginning it feels like you're still getting into your writing groove, but by the second scene all it flows nicely and it's really fun to read! Using Pikachu and Eevee as the scent-carriers was very clever, and it's really IC.

GOOD JOB /HIGH FIVE

[kouriko]

Thank you! ♥ I'm glad you liked it.

/high fives back!

[karudoll]

AWWWWWWWWW ♥

[ibuberu]

This has to be my favourite fic from you yet! Very clever to use Eevee/Pikachu as scent carriers, and the play-fight scene they had was adorable too. The emotions and descriptions were very well thought out and I could feel the emotions and almost maybe smell what the two were smelling, it was lovely :D But there was tense confusion here: " his threadbare ash-mauve jacket spread so neatly on the floor it looks as if he ironed it and placed it there himself. since its past tense it should be 'looked' yeah.

[kouriko]

♥ I'm glad you thought so! Thanks for the comment. ^^ It made my day~

Oops! Haha. Fixed that. Thank you.

[muumuu122]

Lovely~

[kouriko]

Thank you! ♥