A Woman's Heart

Dec 13, 2009 21:46


 
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fanfiction, drabble, ohshc

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starianprincess December 14 2009, 16:07:58 UTC
“If she’s anything like me, she won’t.”

This was beautiful. I loved it. :)

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kouriko December 14 2009, 16:38:42 UTC
Thank you. ^_^

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nicluv1787 December 14 2009, 17:55:20 UTC
Made me Cry, So touching.

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kouriko December 15 2009, 00:31:08 UTC
Thank you very much. =)

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shinebunny January 18 2010, 18:46:40 UTC
Aw, this is so sweet. I love the focus on the dialogue here.

One piece of concrit, and a technicality at that: would Ranka have started using that name before Kotoko's death, or would he still have been going by Ryoji? I'm not sure, but I thought he was still going by Ryoji at the time.

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kouriko January 18 2010, 21:56:39 UTC
Thank you. ^^

And I actually wasn't sure about that, since I didn't know when he began that career and gained his nickname...

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hope_assassin March 26 2010, 18:29:52 UTC
That's an amazingly epic fic, I loved it. Your take on these two's final moments is really heartfelt and lovely. <3

Memming~

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kouriko March 26 2010, 18:59:43 UTC
Thank you! ^^

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