Child's Play (snark bait)

[kpopficwank]

Title: Child's Play
Anon alias: snark bait
Character(s)/Pairing (Fandom): Jongyu, OT5 (SHINee)
Cliché: age regression
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 7125
Summary: In which Jinki and Jonghyun exhibit their utter incompetence at taking care of three suspiciously familiar children.
Notes: I started writing this before I found out about the group's new room

Comments

[anonymous]

i really loved this! ♥ /bookmarks

[anonymous]

omg. this is so cute and adorable and i found it super cute! clichéd? what is that word? it certainly does not apply this this story here. poor jinki. poor jonghyun. poor minho. poor, traumatized shinee. ♥

i loved it! thank you for writing this.

[anonymous]

i think there are far too many references to hello baby and/or past events in reality shows for my liking. which makes it sound a tad bit tacky. but hey, if you were going for cute, then you did it, it's an overload of vanilla sweetness. predictable, but yeah, fluffy.

oh and the part where they were all back to their ages and they were arguing about who kissed who, i thought the conversation was dragging too much that it sounded unnatural already. one or two people pointing fingers is okay, but everyone acknowledging who did what exactly is too straightforward. a leaving a little bit of it out is better, like what you did in some of the other conversations in the earlier parts.

[anonymous]

aww this was too cute. :') i loved it.

[anonymous]

this was a cute, enjoyable read and it works well with the cliche. Jinki's life is already hard enough with because of TaeMinKey babies but Jonghyun just had to be such a brat also.
gj anon ♥