ILU CAEK FOR TAEK ANON ALSKDF;DSKAEGNKFL3;LEKDRGOIUHYGIYFTGHUGYGGVHHGVBVGVGVG
ESPECIALLY THE LAST LINES
I CAN'T LIKE BREATHE ASDLFKA;LSDKFADS;GNVRIFA'E/O3GNVK/'AESWOIVE/'NRFOA'EOIGHN3R5OIG;EA;LKF;LADFREIA
WHY ARE YOU SO GREAT
bb idek why you even fretted over this i /love it/
i love the jaysu memories interwoven into the dialogue between jay and jinyoung looooooove it
this is like. one of my favorite falling in love fics because it's so tragic and special and ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I HEART THIS SO MUCH the jaysu is so :( augh!!!!!! junsu!!!!!!
jay!!!!!!
why am i like this!!!!!!!!
kind of glad that i'm anon so people don't judge me by how i react to this but :| asdlfkas;fdsd;flk;sadlfsd; i l u ♥
He had expected more tears and streaked mascara, but all he remembered was passing the rows of cars after the dance in the parking lot, rocking with the motions of bodies inside.
i can't believe you wrote me vietnam war era fic. i can't believe it. fucking brilliant laksd;fl aaaaaand original. only you ♥
"Thanks for listening to my song." A quick, awkward bow. "My name is Junsu. Please support our cause."
"i might be more attached to you than i'd like to admit"
"You could risk losing your scholarship. You get a full ride, don't you?"
Jaebeom reached the maximum capacity of his duffel. Jinyoung was still in his room.
I really like your transition here between Jay's memories and reality and then his resolve to do what he believes in. The two lines of dialogue balance each other out and contrast really, really, well but it's not abrupt because of the italicized part in the middle and akfd;aslkf you make me want to expand this universe ;~;
omg thank goodness you are so happy with it. This is seriously the watered-down, diet and caffeine-free version of the story. I totally intended giving Junsu a back story (and you know, some presence?), and having the whole actual falling in love part happen. There was going to be a token love scene, all glossed over and PG13 but it wasn't about sex, agaggghhh! And pseudosocialist propaganda, maybe. I kind of wanted to be that crazy anon who stuck political ideology in fic. I promise if there's one fic I finish, it will be the grown up, filled out version of this one!
dafjlkadf thank you so much for your kind comments and flail!
I JUST JUMPED IN TO SEE WHAT SORT OF FIC THE SECRETSANTA WAS PUSHING OUT AND THIS IS THE FIRST THING I READ ALSDJFKJAREFLAJEAGH SO GOOD HELP ME
i lvoe it i love it alkjflakj i'm so speechless. the ending was clean and absolutely spotless. junsu is adorable here. the little dividers are perfect. i'm absolutely speechless. this is going in my memories, i don't dare let myself forget this.
!!! thank you so much for the caps and mash! I wasn't sure it'd appeal to anyone outside of my recipient (since we've talked silly history things)! I wish I knew who you were too ;_;
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ILU CAEK FOR TAEK ANON ALSKDF;DSKAEGNKFL3;LEKDRGOIUHYGIYFTGHUGYGGVHHGVBVGVGVG
ESPECIALLY THE LAST LINES
I CAN'T LIKE
BREATHE
ASDLFKA;LSDKFADS;GNVRIFA'E/O3GNVK/'AESWOIVE/'NRFOA'EOIGHN3R5OIG;EA;LKF;LADFREIA
WHY ARE YOU SO GREAT
bb idek why you even fretted over this i /love it/
i love the jaysu memories interwoven into the dialogue between jay and jinyoung looooooove it
this is like. one of my favorite falling in love fics because it's so tragic and special and ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I HEART THIS SO MUCH the jaysu is so :( augh!!!!!! junsu!!!!!!
jay!!!!!!
why am i like this!!!!!!!!
kind of glad that i'm anon so people don't judge me by how i react to this but :| asdlfkas;fdsd;flk;sadlfsd; i l u ♥
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this is a really subtle, heartbreaking detail :(
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"Thanks for listening to my song." A quick, awkward bow. "My name is Junsu. Please support our cause."
"i might be more attached to you than i'd like to admit"
"You could risk losing your scholarship. You get a full ride, don't you?"
Jaebeom reached the maximum capacity of his duffel. Jinyoung was still in his room.
I really like your transition here between Jay's memories and reality and then his resolve to do what he believes in. The two lines of dialogue balance each other out and contrast really, really, well but it's not abrupt because of the italicized part in the middle and akfd;aslkf you make me want to expand this universe ;~;
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dafjlkadf thank you so much for your kind comments and flail!
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WHAT
WHAT
HOW CAN THIS BE SO GOOD I DONT' EVEN
NOW I REGRET NOT FOLLOWNG THE MEME
I JUST JUMPED IN TO SEE WHAT SORT OF FIC THE SECRETSANTA WAS PUSHING OUT AND THIS IS THE FIRST THING I READ ALSDJFKJAREFLAJEAGH SO GOOD HELP ME
i lvoe it i love it alkjflakj i'm so speechless. the ending was clean and absolutely spotless. junsu is adorable here. the little dividers are perfect. i'm absolutely speechless. this is going in my memories, i don't dare let myself forget this.
i wish i knew who you were ; ;
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