Beast/Hyunseung-centric or HyunseungxEveryone/Mulan
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:26:07 UTC
Running away from home probably hadn't been the greatest idea, especially with his dad being sick, his grandmother going senile, anhis sister being at the age where he was going to have to start beating boys off of her with a stick. However, the economy in their little part of South Korea -- a small town near the sea where the view wasn't good enough to bring in tourism and the land could only be used for agriculture -- was failing spectacularly and it had seemed like the best option for him was to leave for the city and find a stable job
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Re: Beast/Hyunseung-centric or HyunseungxEveryone/Mulan/Part 2
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:27:29 UTC
He's telling the truth though. Unlike the other kids from that little town, he didn't leave because he was bored of the place. He didn't move to the city because he wanted excitement. All the money he was going to make would go straight back home to his family, so that his dad wouldn't have to worry about medicine and his sister wouldn't have to worry about ugly clothes that weren't her style and so his mom would finally stop worrying about what would happen once his grandmother died and needed to be cremated
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Re: Beast/Hyunseung-centric or HyunseungxEveryone/Mulan/Part 3
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:28:32 UTC
Although, he thinks as he meticulously fills out the papers, he probably should have expected this. It wasn't like it was hard, but rather it was just very tedious and of course the perfectionist side of Hyunseung would never have allowed him to do a half-assed job of filling out every question completely. As he looks over the questionaire and starts jotting down information about himself -- age, level of education, previous job opportunities, any medical conditions -- he fails to fill out a single, crucial thing.
"I'm done," he says maybe forty-something minutes later, neat black writing on every single page. Hyunseung's penmanship had always been excellent, and he's a little proud of his work even if it's nothing more than answers.
He carefully hands over the pile to Hyuna who hands him a torn piece of paper from her notepad in exchange.
Third floor, Conference Room 3-B; 4:00 PM it reads, and when he says it out loud there's probably confusion in his voice or something because the girl just laughs at him
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Re: Beast/Hyunseung-centric or HyunseungxEveryone/Mulan/Part 4
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:29:29 UTC
Kikwang seems to notice too, seeing as he immediately pats Dongwoon's shoulder, albeit rather awkwardly. "This big guy's shy around new people," he explains as all three of them make it into the elevator. He removes his hand quickly enough after the recipient of his concern glares at him childishly
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Re: Beast/Hyunseung-centric or HyunseungxEveryone/Mulan/Part 5
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:30:17 UTC
"My father is old and ill, and I came in his place. He didn't want to let down his old friend," he answers, and while it was only the last part he lied about, he still didn't feel any better. In order to prove himself to Doojoon though, Hyunseung takes out the letter sent from the president of CUBE Corp. to his father as if there was no other explanation for his possession of the letter besides his father willingly giving it to him
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Re: Beast/Hyunseung-centric or HyunseungxEveryone/Mulan/Part 8(FINAL)
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:33:56 UTC
Junhyung just kinda shrugs and leans back against the wall of the pool. Despite sounding ridiculously funny, it obviously was a tramatic experience for Hyunseung, whatever it was.
"It's things like that that make people think you're a girl just trying to pass off as a guy or something stupid like that," he tells Hyunseung, "but you know what? I'll have your back at work."
Hyunseung turns to look at him, eyes wide and hopeful and he comes closer so that he can hold onto Junhyung's arm.
"Really? You mean it?"
Junhyung laughs, and smiles at Hyunseung for what probably is the first time. It's sweet, and Hyunseung thinks he probably should smile like that more often.
"That's right, princess, I'll make a man out of you."
and with that, i'm done, i'm happy, i'm proud. i could have done better with characterization and i initially wanted hyunseung's traumatic naked men!a la mulan experience to happen in fic, but i'm content. yay for 4700+ words!
Re: Beast/Hyunseung-centric or HyunseungxEveryone/Mulan/Part 8(FINAL)
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:59:00 UTC
good job, anon! and dw about what you could have done better, because you've done great. and under time pressure, too! \o/
i love how hyunseung doesn't even have to try to convince anyone that he's a girl and they just assume. and all the possibilities of a pairing! yoesob, the childhood friend, kikwang the flirty sunbae, dongwoon the mysterious guy, doojoon the coveted boss, and junhyung the guardian (lol!) dragon. i really like this, anon, and would love to see it continued!
Re: Beast/Hyunseung-centric or HyunseungxEveryone/Mulan/Part 8(FINAL)
anonymous
July 11 2010, 08:04:49 UTC
;~; thanks so much! as happy as i was with this, i couldn't help but worry too, like if my mulan references were okay or what-not ;u;
i hope i can continue this, or better yet rewrite it so that i can make it flow better and come to a better conclusion, but it seems that only timed challenges seem to inspire me these days.
thanks so much for taking the time to read through this, anon. i know it was a monster to read. XD
shinee/2min/mulan [2/2]
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:29:55 UTC
he awakens the next morning to someone frantically shaking his shoulder. he bolts up in his pallet, thinking that he must have missed the contingent headed for the training camp, but he realizes that it is still far too dark for the departure time
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Re: shinee/2min/mulan [2/2]
anonymous
July 11 2010, 07:40:56 UTC
i think this was a nice interpretation of the prompt, anon. you twisted the reason why taem went to war and had him going as minho rather than as a girl pretending to be a boy, and i like how you wrote this. nice work, anon. ^o^ and congrats on finishing!
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"I'm done," he says maybe forty-something minutes later, neat black writing on every single page. Hyunseung's penmanship had always been excellent, and he's a little proud of his work even if it's nothing more than answers.
He carefully hands over the pile to Hyuna who hands him a torn piece of paper from her notepad in exchange.
Third floor, Conference Room 3-B; 4:00 PM it reads, and when he says it out loud there's probably confusion in his voice or something because the girl just laughs at him ( ... )
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"It's things like that that make people think you're a girl just trying to pass off as a guy or something stupid like that," he tells Hyunseung, "but you know what? I'll have your back at work."
Hyunseung turns to look at him, eyes wide and hopeful and he comes closer so that he can hold onto Junhyung's arm.
"Really? You mean it?"
Junhyung laughs, and smiles at Hyunseung for what probably is the first time. It's sweet, and Hyunseung thinks he probably should smile like that more often.
"That's right, princess, I'll make a man out of you."
and with that, i'm done, i'm happy, i'm proud. i could have done better with characterization and i initially wanted hyunseung's traumatic naked men!a la mulan experience to happen in fic, but i'm content. yay for 4700+ words!
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i love how hyunseung doesn't even have to try to convince anyone that he's a girl and they just assume. and all the possibilities of a pairing! yoesob, the childhood friend, kikwang the flirty sunbae, dongwoon the mysterious guy, doojoon the coveted boss, and junhyung the guardian (lol!) dragon. i really like this, anon, and would love to see it continued!
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i hope i can continue this, or better yet rewrite it so that i can make it flow better and come to a better conclusion, but it seems that only timed challenges seem to inspire me these days.
thanks so much for taking the time to read through this, anon. i know it was a monster to read. XD
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