Re: Yonghwa/Onew
anonymous
January 5 2011, 05:20:55 UTC
oh my god i love this. the description of onew knocking his teeth out is so fantastically violent and visceral, and the humor in the second part balances it out really well. yonghwa being all offended at his teeth being ugly lmao so cute ♥
Re: Yonghwa/Onew
anonymous
January 5 2011, 05:40:18 UTC
i love all of the descriptions in this because they're just so entertaining, and idek. i really like how you've written this, and omg, Yonghwa getting butthurt. XD this is pretty awesome, nice work.
minho/onew, "there is no classy way to ask the dentist for his phone number" [1/2]
anonymous
January 5 2011, 05:22:04 UTC
minho is not particularly pleased when the receptionist tells him that his regular dentist is out sick and that he'll be having his appointment with someone they've just hired. dr. lim has kind eyes, and she's always patient with the way minho tenses up the second he feels metal scratch against his teeth. he considers rescheduling but eventually decides that it's better to get it over with now instead of prolonging the anxiety.
his name is called after ten minutes of nervously flipping through magazines in the waiting room, and he looks up to see a familiar face. "good afternoon, choi-ssi," says kim kibum, minho's least favorite hygienist. he isn't rough, but he isn't gentle either, and he has a habit of telling minho to "just calm down" when he flinches. minho groans internally and follows him back. he slides on the giant sunglasses handed to him and closes his eyes as he's laid down. deep breaths, he reminds himself. soon it'll be over, and then you don't have to come back for another six months.the good thing about kibum is that
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minho/onew, "there is no classy way to ask the dentist for his phone number" [2/3]
anonymous
January 5 2011, 05:23:11 UTC
that night, jonghyun drags minho to the gay bar down the street from their apartment, completely ignoring minho's protests that his taste in men doesn't include leather or sparkly pink feather boas. "i get that you're a creative genius and you're writing the greatest novel known to mankind, but you spend all your time cooped up in your room and quite frankly, it isn't healthy," jonghyun tells him. "plus i am sacrificing a night when i could be out having dinner with my girlfriend to try and get you a boyfriend, so just shut up and be grateful
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minho/onew, "there is no classy way to ask the dentist for his phone number" [3/3]
anonymous
January 5 2011, 05:23:47 UTC
minho wonders if the thumping in his chest is a heart attack. "you mean like a…date?"
jinki nods, and minho realizes that his face is bright red. "sorry, i know that's probably really weird for you, since i was sticking sharp things in your mouth a few hours ago, but i just think you're really handsome and i'd like to get to know you better. if that's okay."
"yeah. yeah, absolutely. we could go now if you want, there's a coffeeshop down the street that's open 24 hours." jinki beams at him, and minho thinks distantly that his heart really cannot take this, he's going to keel over in the next five minutes and that will probably put a damper on their relationship. but hey, he figures, at least he'll die happy.
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where did my mouth go, what did you do with my mouth, I knew you looked too young to be good at this.
His incisors were an evil kind of pointy and the bottom row were snagged on each other and twisted.
Still loopy, Jinki exclaimed, “Why do your teeth suck!”
DIES ANON, DIES
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his name is called after ten minutes of nervously flipping through magazines in the waiting room, and he looks up to see a familiar face. "good afternoon, choi-ssi," says kim kibum, minho's least favorite hygienist. he isn't rough, but he isn't gentle either, and he has a habit of telling minho to "just calm down" when he flinches. minho groans internally and follows him back. he slides on the giant sunglasses handed to him and closes his eyes as he's laid down. deep breaths, he reminds himself. soon it'll be over, and then you don't have to come back for another six months.the good thing about kibum is that ( ... )
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jinki nods, and minho realizes that his face is bright red. "sorry, i know that's probably really weird for you, since i was sticking sharp things in your mouth a few hours ago, but i just think you're really handsome and i'd like to get to know you better. if that's okay."
"yeah. yeah, absolutely. we could go now if you want, there's a coffeeshop down the street that's open 24 hours." jinki beams at him, and minho thinks distantly that his heart really cannot take this, he's going to keel over in the next five minutes and that will probably put a damper on their relationship. but hey, he figures, at least he'll die happy.
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OH MY GOD CRIES
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