dongwoon/key 1/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 05:11:45 UTC
"Fucking hell," Dongwoon hisses. "Can you relax? I think I'm bleeding."
"Shut the hell up," Kibum grits. His grip on Dongwoon's shoulder blades only tighten. "You try shoving fifty shits up your ass and then relaxing."
"It's two fingers!" Dongwoon retorts, exasperated. "Are we going to do this or not?"
"Can't you just find the fucking prostate before shoving so much up there?" Kibum mutters through clenched teeth. "I thought you said this would feel good
( ... )
Re: dongwoon/key 2/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 05:12:46 UTC
Kibum can feel Dongwoon's chest shake with laughter, hear the contractions inside his neck. "Because you can take it." Kibum feels Dongwoon reach down between them and suddenly there's a slick, foreign heat pressed against his dick. Dongwoon's hand wraps around them both and holds them together, thumb brushing over the tips and mixing the precome. Kibum bites back a sound. "Come on," Dongwoon grins into Kibum's hair. "Move your hips
( ... )
Re: dongwoon/key 3/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 07:33:47 UTC
"You're imagining things. Come back to my mouth."
"No, shut up," and the entire dialogue in general wheesing anon i have always been afraid of stanning these two 100% because of lack of (good) dongkey fic but this was so glorious!
just awkward you say! dongwoon was a cute sexy thing (whenever key wasn't downplaying his sexual prowess lol anon you are so adorable)
i love how you portrayed them as boys and oblivious jinki's guest appearance and the diagram and can you tell i love this!
Re: dongwoon/key 3/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 11:46:06 UTC
give in to the dongkey, it is magical! magical, i say *_* ldkjfaewfd thank you so much! ahhh i was just started to feel so awkward for posting awkward frottage when it seemed like no one was even interested so thank you for your comment, really ♥
i always feel like key would refuse to admit that anybody that isn't him is the sexiest thing in the room :| and i'm so glad that they came off as just being boys, i'm always afraid that i'll write key too feminine or too flowery because i honestly believe he's a little more than that. and isn't jinki always oblivious? ♥ lksdjafk yes i can tell and it makes me so happy anon, thank you!
Re: dongwoon/key 3/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 22:41:33 UTC
i have calmed myself ;~; ok ok i may if you keep writing them anon! rolls around in this all day, it gets better every time i read it! i just want to quote everything they say right back at you haha.
right? it's just a personality thing to me. when it comes down to it, key just has the mentality of a teenage boy.
i get the impression that he feels obliged to give off that image when there are cameras in the room, but in private he mostly just doesn't care. except for when it comes to sex lmao.
Re: dongwoon/key 3/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 11:48:20 UTC
aaahahahdkadfk did you know that this is my favourite type of compliment? ; ; thank you so much anon, it makes me so happy whenever someone ends up enjoying a fic even without being in the fandom/ship ♥
Re: dongwoon/key 3/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 11:50:22 UTC
ahhh thank you! hilariously awkward, that is exactly what i strive for ; ; i think there's never enough dongwoon/key, so i thought i'd contribute instead of whining for it for once! yayyyy :D
Re: dongwoon/key 3/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 13:03:17 UTC
:D i love this - i like how at certain points it's sexy and sweet amidst the awkward, like key getting turned on and remembering, oh yeah, why they're in bed together, and then kissing dongwoon because of his stupidly wonderful grin... and then are all these amusing, realistic details like key being all, "um you are touching me with the same fingers that were up my ass" and dongwoon like "yeah, and what? >:D"
Re: dongwoon/key 3/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 16:30:24 UTC
oh sweet jesus, there's a diagram!!! :D :D
oh anon, this was amazing. i have little interest in key or dongwoon and even less interest in them together, but i love awkward sex and this was just perfect!
Re: dongwoon/key 3/3
anonymous
April 21 2011, 23:07:55 UTC
omg anon, I don't even ship this. shit I'm not even sure if I know who these guys are, but this was brilliant. I love the awkwardness and the humor and ugh, I just love it. good job.
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"Shut the hell up," Kibum grits. His grip on Dongwoon's shoulder blades only tighten. "You try shoving fifty shits up your ass and then relaxing."
"It's two fingers!" Dongwoon retorts, exasperated. "Are we going to do this or not?"
"Can't you just find the fucking prostate before shoving so much up there?" Kibum mutters through clenched teeth. "I thought you said this would feel good ( ... )
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"No, shut up," and the entire dialogue in general wheesing anon i have always been afraid of stanning these two 100% because of lack of (good) dongkey fic but this was so glorious!
just awkward you say! dongwoon was a cute sexy thing (whenever key wasn't downplaying his sexual prowess lol anon you are so adorable)
i love how you portrayed them as boys and oblivious jinki's guest appearance and the diagram and can you tell i love this!
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i always feel like key would refuse to admit that anybody that isn't him is the sexiest thing in the room :| and i'm so glad that they came off as just being boys, i'm always afraid that i'll write key too feminine or too flowery because i honestly believe he's a little more than that. and isn't jinki always oblivious? ♥ lksdjafk yes i can tell and it makes me so happy anon, thank you!
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right? it's just a personality thing to me. when it comes down to it, key just has the mentality of a teenage boy.
i get the impression that he feels obliged to give off that image when there are cameras in the room, but in private he mostly just doesn't care. except for when it comes to sex lmao.
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oh anon, this was amazing. i have little interest in key or dongwoon and even less interest in them together, but i love awkward sex and this was just perfect!
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