Re: b1a4: dongwoo/chansik
anonymous
May 5 2011, 06:45:04 UTC
omg ;____; we haven't even established a solid basis for this pairing yet and already i have such a weakness for them.
THIS IS SO CUTE chansik's smile is like puffy cotton candy clouds pouring out puppies and landing on marshmallow pillows while the sun from the teletubbies smiles down on everything ):
#5, shinee jongyu
anonymous
May 5 2011, 06:38:21 UTC
Jinki sees Jonghyun for the first time on an otherwise empty subway car. Save for the PA and the shuffling of Jonghyun’s feet, there’s no sound, and it’s only natural, Jinki tells himself, to observe him. Jonghyun takes a seat on the other side of the car and immediately takes out a book, earbuds already in place. Jinki strains to read the title-Cat’s Cradle-and then leans back.
Occasionally, Jonghyun looks up, and Jinki’s heart stops-the boy is just glancing in what happens to be his direction, but the feeling of eyes on him is so foreign, so fleeting, that his cheeks burn. Jonghyun’s quite good-looking, with kind eyes and a shirt that, unlike Jinki’s, has clearly been ironed. For a moment, he considers saying something, maybe asking Jonghyun about the book. He rehearses the conversation in his mind. What’s that about? Are you reading it for school? Are you at Yonsei too? Ultimately, the train stops without incident, and a flood of people board-they’re getting closer to the heart of the city. Jinki loses sight of Jonghyun in the
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Re: #5, shinee jongyu
anonymous
May 5 2011, 06:45:49 UTC
anon, this was adorable.
He rehearses the conversation in his mind omg that is spot on :3
i like how you included jinki's insecurity - it does seem like something jinki would think about himself, a walking dream, always the one to bring the team down like a dead weight. it's what makes him human and ilh for it
and then jonghyun ;~; he is the sweetest. it reminds me of that time jinki said that jonghyun is the most caring out of all the members because he does these little things that shouldn't matter but they do. i loved this so much anon ♥
Re: #5, shinee jongyu
anonymous
May 6 2011, 08:59:45 UTC
i love this, anon! i'm amazed at how people can include characterization and i didn't even know that that's how it's done and i just come to cherish this story because of it. it's amazing ♥
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THIS IS SO CUTE chansik's smile is like puffy cotton candy clouds pouring out puppies and landing on marshmallow pillows while the sun from the teletubbies smiles down on everything ):
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sigh chansik's smile makes the world a better place, i swear.
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Occasionally, Jonghyun looks up, and Jinki’s heart stops-the boy is just glancing in what happens to be his direction, but the feeling of eyes on him is so foreign, so fleeting, that his cheeks burn. Jonghyun’s quite good-looking, with kind eyes and a shirt that, unlike Jinki’s, has clearly been ironed. For a moment, he considers saying something, maybe asking Jonghyun about the book. He rehearses the conversation in his mind. What’s that about? Are you reading it for school? Are you at Yonsei too? Ultimately, the train stops without incident, and a flood of people board-they’re getting closer to the heart of the city. Jinki loses sight of Jonghyun in the ( ... )
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He rehearses the conversation in his mind omg that is spot on :3
i like how you included jinki's insecurity - it does seem like something jinki would think about himself, a walking dream, always the one to bring the team down like a dead weight. it's what makes him human and ilh for it
and then jonghyun ;~; he is the sweetest. it reminds me of that time jinki said that jonghyun is the most caring out of all the members because he does these little things that shouldn't matter but they do. i loved this so much anon ♥
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it's amazing ♥
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