Re: Luna centric - Prompt #4
anonymous
May 8 2011, 09:08:14 UTC
idk why it took me so long to reply, but i really love this, anon. especially since it seems like some sort of 30s au...? idk but the tone of it is lovely. there are a few grammar issues that you might want to look into, but otherwise this is wonderful and i definitely think you should go on :)
snsd, taeny, vaguely prompt three
anonymous
May 8 2011, 05:54:55 UTC
hairlip did the werewolf trope a lot better. ;___;
Taeyeon is waiting patiently for Tiffany when she arrives home. She has a small animal caught in the clench of her maw, and her knuckles are smeared in blood that, much to Tiffany's nausea, is still visibly wet, and her hair is ragged and wild and knotted, and her sweatshirt is torn from the right shoulder all the way down, in a neat jagged line, to her bellybutton, and there's still a streak of fur curling around her breast, and her tail is thumping against the wooden planks of the deck, and Tiffany needs to stop cataloging things so extensively because she feels a little like she's going to topple over onto the driveway if she doesn't make it up to the deck first, and Taeyeon might find herself curious enough to sniff at her unconscious body, which would be weird"My life is really weird," she says to no one in particular, wobbling a little on her feet, and Taeyeon lets the animal slide from her mouth onto the deck, letting out a companionable howl, head perking up
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Re: snsd, taeny, vaguely prompt three
anonymous
May 8 2011, 09:11:32 UTC
you have a way with imagery, anon. i especially like the line about taeyeon tasting like jessica's cup, since that's something i think most people have tasted so it's easy for the reader to imagine themselves in tiffany's place.
b1a4; junghwan/jinyoung; prompt #5
anonymous
May 8 2011, 05:57:37 UTC
junghwan's tired. there's nothing new in that; they've been working seemingly 24/7 lately. he never knew just how many things that were needed for a debut, or rather, how many things that were needed to make a debut successful. dance practice, vocal practice, writing lyrics, writing music, taking pictures, styling, clothes, concept. they even had a class for learning how to smile, even if all of them just laughed themselves through it because it seems too ridiculous to be real
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suju, Qmimin prompt 4
anonymous
May 8 2011, 06:17:40 UTC
Kinda a literal take to the prompt but ehhh. selfishly dedicated to the qmi(min) anon above hehe omg i almost unanoned D:“What do you think it would feel like to be someone else
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Taeyeon is waiting patiently for Tiffany when she arrives home. She has a small animal caught in the clench of her maw, and her knuckles are smeared in blood that, much to Tiffany's nausea, is still visibly wet, and her hair is ragged and wild and knotted, and her sweatshirt is torn from the right shoulder all the way down, in a neat jagged line, to her bellybutton, and there's still a streak of fur curling around her breast, and her tail is thumping against the wooden planks of the deck, and Tiffany needs to stop cataloging things so extensively because she feels a little like she's going to topple over onto the driveway if she doesn't make it up to the deck first, and Taeyeon might find herself curious enough to sniff at her unconscious body, which would be weird"My life is really weird," she says to no one in particular, wobbling a little on her feet, and Taeyeon lets the animal slide from her mouth onto the deck, letting out a companionable howl, head perking up ( ... )
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ahhhh i liked this! lol their banter and zhoumi being awkward. my heart went ow at the end though, but in a good way!?
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Yay I'm glad you liked! And yeah ow in a good way because first q/mi ->min then eventual qmimin \o/
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