snsd, sunyeon, prompt #3
anonymous
May 30 2011, 05:27:13 UTC
10. My first time was with another trainee -- a girl, of course, with the worst haircut that I'd ever seen until Hyoyeon was introduced to the stylists, and fingernails that she really should have trimmed before she decided to finger me, and crooked teeth that felt awkward against my tongue. You still think that it was you, which is flattering but naive and fuck, fuck, I wish that it had been you.
9. I asked the doctors whose knives I went under to surgically remove the scar right below my knee because I couldn't bear the thought of my legs suddenly being put on display and being marked so obviously, and no, I don't care much that they never emphasize my legs, that they shove me to the back of the formations with you, because I care, because I know that it's there
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b1a4/gen, prompt 2 [2/2]
anonymous
May 30 2011, 05:45:45 UTC
Jinyoung nodded again, dropping the blinds across the window with a quick wave of his hand. "Don't you ever think it's strange?" He jerked his head towards the scene outside, of people rushing to and from work and home and stores and errands, unaware of another world immersed within them.
Dongwoo laughed quietly, a hand on Jinyoung's shoulder. "We're used to it," he said. "We've never known anything else."
Jinyoung pushed the hand away, and crossed the room to the door where Dongwoo's wet clothes were still piled. "I wish we weren't," he said, quietly enough that Dongwoo leaned forward to catch his words.
"Yeah. Me too."
Jinyoung pulled the door open a crack, slipping through to the other side. "When they wake up, get them ready to move. We got what we came for and can't stay longer."
Dongwoo nodded, a half smile on his face as he joined Chansik on the couch. "You're right," he agreed. He didn't wait to see Jinyoung take off from the balcony before letting his own eyes drift shut, listening to the rain fall against the world
Re: b1a4/gen, prompt 2 [2/2]
anonymous
May 30 2011, 07:04:00 UTC
huh, this is pretty interesting even though i'm kinda lost. it has a pretty good hook at the moment, so if you can flesh this out a bit, i think it could be a pretty good fic. :) i wish i could say more, but i really know nothing else about the group. the premise is just really interesting.
Re: b1a4/gen, prompt 2 [2/2]
anonymous
May 30 2011, 12:15:48 UTC
thanks, anon!
I woke up this morning and was like "...I could've wrapped it up and explained so much more in half an hour if I just stuck to two of them" but idk, I wrote without planning and the world kind of grew in my mind in the first five lines and wouldn't let go /)_(\ I definitely want to flesh this out once I have the time to.
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9. I asked the doctors whose knives I went under to surgically remove the scar right below my knee because I couldn't bear the thought of my legs suddenly being put on display and being marked so obviously, and no, I don't care much that they never emphasize my legs, that they shove me to the back of the formations with you, because I care, because I know that it's there ( ... )
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Dongwoo laughed quietly, a hand on Jinyoung's shoulder. "We're used to it," he said. "We've never known anything else."
Jinyoung pushed the hand away, and crossed the room to the door where Dongwoo's wet clothes were still piled. "I wish we weren't," he said, quietly enough that Dongwoo leaned forward to catch his words.
"Yeah. Me too."
Jinyoung pulled the door open a crack, slipping through to the other side. "When they wake up, get them ready to move. We got what we came for and can't stay longer."
Dongwoo nodded, a half smile on his face as he joined Chansik on the couch. "You're right," he agreed. He didn't wait to see Jinyoung take off from the balcony before letting his own eyes drift shut, listening to the rain fall against the world
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I woke up this morning and was like "...I could've wrapped it up and explained so much more in half an hour if I just stuck to two of them" but idk, I wrote without planning and the world kind of grew in my mind in the first five lines and wouldn't let go /)_(\ I definitely want to flesh this out once I have the time to.
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